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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing. It\'s a very interesting set-up you used here and you pulled it off brilliantly. Great job!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I\'ve been just WAITING for a dirty, manipulative fic with Archer in it!! This was superbly written, and I love the mind games especially; the comments Archer kept making about Ed was great, and it was nice and long to boot!! You are an excellent author, and I\'m keeping my eyes out for more stuff by you ^_~
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
God, that was brutal.
You, sir, are a genius :)
What I liked most was the interspersed comments about Ed - and god, that was painful enough to make you tear your hair out ;_; It made Roy\'s abuse just that much more awful, realizing that he went through all that only to render Ed\'s own sacrifice null and void. He ends up hurting the very person he set out to rescue. Jaysus.
Perfect, abject horror. I thank you very much.
God, that was brutal.
You, sir, are a genius :)
What I liked most was the interspersed comments about Ed - and god, that was painful enough to make you tear your hair out ;_; It made Roy\'s abuse just that much more awful, realizing that he went through all that only to render Ed\'s own sacrifice null and void. He ends up hurting the very person he set out to rescue. Jaysus.
Perfect, abject horror. I thank you very much.
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. I love angest and you did it perfectly. Here\'s an idea. Make a second chapter with Ed in it so we know what happened to him. If anything. Make it just as angesty. YOU ROCK!