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yay for everyone at the competition ^^ but seriously, duo is right.. you shouldn't write any more about the competition or else i'm going to need cpr as well! lol

lol, i think americans will get it as well! we have wheeties over here too ^^

Hey love this story :D..we usually say about bad drivers 'they got their license out of a cracker jack box' Cracker Jacks are carmel pop corn and they are good :D update soon :D hugs

I eagerly await each chapter. Keep up the great work. It's a fantastic story. I am a great fan of your work, I have read almost all of it.

Well, reading all 50 chapters in two days does speak for itself about your story and writing. I have thoroughly enjoyed every chapter and learned quite a lot as well, which I have never objected. The way you portray the characters is elegant and fiery all in one (if that makes any sense). I'm personally glad that Relena wasn't portrayed as she usually is--a hopeless case that's in love with Heero and just shrieks her love for him to the world. It's nice to see her, deranged and delusional than clinically insane and incurable. I think this obsession view fits her much better than the unrequited love view.

There are a couple things I have questions on though, first off, what exactly is the 'humane killer'? A rifle or something? Second, would be the time line. To my understanding, Heero was in a cast for six-eight weeks, which left one week before he went to the camp. Hopefully I'm right so far. He had his cast removed and rode Zero with minimal pain as well as went swimming the next day or within the next few days. Yet, the muscles should've been atrophied slightly from the cast and thus, riding would've damnwell hurt! Let alone diving into the swimming pool.

I know from my experience--joint removal--that surguries like that are usually a long process, or so it was to my understanding. That's why I'm asking about the time in this story. I'm not certain I have it right because then it feels too rushed. Having a metal plate and pin inserted into the humerus bone isn't exactly minor surgury. Hell, my surgury happened six months ago and I am now just being allowed to lift over fifteen pounds and type.

So, not to bash that or anything, I'm just curious because I'm a bit confused on that part.

Anyway, you don't have to answer any of this, I'm just writing out my questions and such. Other than that, you are a superb writer and I'm looking forward to the next chapter anxiously. Thank you for becoming such a wonderful authress.

--Dhampir

Sorry, I forgot to log in...so yeah, the review above is from me...

Hey!!!!! You know I love your stories, hope nothing bad happens, for the National Cup, but knowing your stories you always have a twist :D can't wait for the next update, can't wait..keep up the good work...hugs

Awesome work. I can tell you put a lot of thought into your writing. I have enjoyed your other stories, as well, mostly notably the Heero/Duo pairings. These two (this and its prequel) are especially good as you are very knowledgeable on your subject. I love the way that you are so descriptive about things,it makes the reading very pleasurable. I am so looking forward to the next update, can't wait to see what kind of twists you will have for us next. I think that is what I also enjoy, the fact that you keep us guessing as to what will happen next, it's not just the same old stuff, rewritten, again. And the characters and the situations are so very believable, they are very three dimensional. Keep up the great work.

...Oh ouch. Poor Zechs! That's so horrible... *hugs Zechs* Well, he's got Treize to look after him now, so he'll be okay. *grin* Hopefully Relena will accept Zechs and *finally* let go of this bloody blind obsession with Heero. I really feel sorry for that boy... that girl is scary when she's like that. x.x;;;

MEW LoVED the chappie !! lotsa fun relena bashing nd stuffs nd go heero nd the others as well cause it really dose take a lota ciurage to do stuff like that mew ne ways do da do I'm glad piecemillion is ok cause he's a cute pony yes yes I know he's a horse but to me they are all ponys Kudos for an awsome chappie and even more so for a seriously awsome fic all together thia one nd equinity are my absolute fave fics in the world! ne way i gtg so till next review

Ja-ne

~ Cat ~