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This was just perfect! It's everything I love in a good fanfic and more. Just the right amount of sex, humour, angst, and cute rolled up into one perfect little bundle of joy. The end was priceless! Gods. I love Edward Elric. xD

I have read many a Roy/Ed Fic, but yours is and will always be my favorite. It's just...perfection. The characters, the plot, the sex, the romance, everything. Nothing can even compare to this wonderful, beautiful, absolutely AMAZING piece of fanfiction.

I think you must be some sort of goddess. Might I follow you around for a bit, in a non-stalkerish fashion? I love you. ^^

If I could write even half this well, I should be pleased. Don't EVER stop writing Roy/Ed, or I shall cry.

This was AWESOME. I kid you not, you have truly created a master-piece here. You are ~hilarious~ -and you've managed to write a deliciously smutty story while maintaining characters and a semblance of plot!-My GOD it's so cute! There were so many adorable interactions and it wasn't just a jerk of fic-I loved it! You had depth and the other characters were utilized and not just used as back-drops for the main sexin'-it-up, It's such a fun read, honestly. I heard about it from a friend and now I just finished it all in one sitting and I am contented.

And your writing style,-lovely. Honestly, your humor comes through in your writing and the way you mold words, it's art. God, you're a funny one and some of those situations-I just had to laugh out-loud, alone in my room-that's when you know it's funny.

Excellent. And I took a quick peak at your profile and it appears that you've written more for Ed/Roy and I , may just have to pop over and see. Expect to hear a new review sometime in the future-you're a good writer-stick with it, you got a LOT of talent.

See you soon!

-DD

“Can I meet him?” Anna asked and Roy blinked in surprise. Eeeee! I;'m so happy about that. I was hoping they'd make up and I kept thinking that if she just met him, she'd see, she'd understand. And damn, I'm not going to be able to finish this til next week, because I'm going away for the holiday and will have no internet. *pouts*

OMFG!!! How did you do this? You have me positively loving this story and I normally hate fic with characters under 16 having sex with adults! You actually have me rooting for them, and damn near crying when Roy's friend walked out on him and gah! How the hell did you do this to me? I knew Ed totally had Roy in the first chapter and ... wow. Just wow. Okay, just finished chapter 7 obviously, on to the rest.

Your stories are ridiculously amazing. I just re-read the first chapters of this after finishing the sequel. I read this story yesterday. I love how you deal with the issues without dwelling too much on them. Especially when Roy is desperately sending psychic messages to Ed so that Ed will hit him like he's supposed to and doesn't Ed know his role? And you made me even like the bad sex. I usually dislike (even though I admire the aim) realistic sex. Fanfic is an escape for me and it breaks the fantasy, but damn you made bad sex hot. And you made me still like the story when they were in a relationship and having relationship issues. Another realistic thing I usually hate.

Hi! I know this story has been completed for some time now but I only just now read it. I started to read your newest fic, "True Story", but since it is a sequel of a sequel I had to start at the beginning. Which brings us to this review. I absolutely loved this story!!! There were so many wonderful things in this story I can't begin to list them all! There were times when I laughed so hard I almost hurt myself! The part where everyone thought Roy had VD (hadn't heard it called that in a while!) was hysterical!! Ed's reaction had me on the floor!! XD OH! When Ed left Roy tied to the headboard because Al had got flattened by a truck (I cracked up over that one too!) was great!! I liked to died laughing when Ed finally came back and released Roy and a very naked Roy (woohoo!) chased Ed out of the house and somehow Ed left boot prints up the wall!! ROFLMAO!! priceless!! OH!! One thing you positively deserve a damn award for was managing to put Paul Simon song lyrics in an FMA fanfic!! "You could be my long lost pal, I could call you Benny." "You can call me Al." Friggin' genius!! I was like, "No way! Lyrics from that old song here?!? WOW!!". sheer brilliance!! I don't know if anyone else mentioned it before but I was impressed! :D Another funny moment was when Roy tried to have actual sex with Ed and Ed kept scooching away from him. Ed said something about pointing him towards the headboard so he couldn't get away and I died laughing at that! I absolutely love the way you've written Ed!! Roy is excellent too! :) Another of their failed attempts at sex that was awesome was when Roy had an angel and a devil on his shoulder arguing over Roy just taking Ed. The devil's comment, "Show him how the Mustang mounts his mare", was the best! :D When Roy and Ed finally did have sex in that hayloft it could not have been written any better. It was especially touching that in the midst of all hell breaking loose around them, Roy and Ed found this one perfect moment to be together and become one like they never had before. The agony Roy went thru while Ed was gone, being haunted by Ed's 'ghost', broke my heart and I cried for him, for them. I sobbed like a baby when Ed finally came home! :) A very much bedraggled and hesitant Ed stumbling out of the shadows to meet a totally overwhelmed and scared to believe it was true Roy had me on the edge of my seat! sad tears, happy tears, tears everywhere! XD Young Al was adorable when he called Roy a pirate! loved it! This was and is a great story that I will read again and again! I wish there was some way to recommend it to others because I think it's so good that everyone should read it! I've already read the next part, "Better Living Through Alchemy", because I HAD to know what happened next and will have a review up for it soon!
Thanks for a fantastic read! :D
Koneko =^.^=

Oh, Man this is exquisitely written. The lessons of Edward at the hands of Mustang are wonderful. The relationship between the two is so tender and sweet. I love it. Great story so far.

good story! I love this fic. You did an excellent job of working the relationship into the 'cracks' of the canon storyline, so they lined up perfectly and it all worked.

Great fic! Though, I kinda feel like Al's genius is stealing Ed's thunder a little...what's Ed's niche, alchemy-wise?