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Oh god I love you. And this Fanfiction. This is the most amazing Ed/Roy that i have ever read! Its funny, touching and wonderful! I love the way you've made Edward and Roy seem in here. And the things they get up to are so funny, its such a wonderful read. Its also so very touching, and so very sweet when it wants to be. I cant even begin to discribe how much i love this fanfiction ^_^ Apart from the fact i stayed up all night to read it because once started i could not close it. Please, please write more to this..its amazing and so are you!

Also, i want to just add that I, love the way you have done their sex life. If some readers dont like the way they havn't had sex yet then a pox on them. It seems all the more realstic that they havn't. Personal i live the way you dragged it out!

WOW...amazing...Ok...Big review...read it really really fast and you might get how i was feeling...lol

I was like OH no! A bomb! and Poor Roy and Oh! Poor Ed...and NO don\'t leave Al there by himself...and then...and then...Roy was all like waking up and Al had come home so it was ok...and then Roy was ok and i was happy and it was good...but THEN he had to go to work and leave the boys in the house by THEMSELVES and THAT\'s a recipe for disaster!! And then Ed got all those bottles out after going through Roy\'s stuff and i was like No! Bad Ed! *slaps hands* But he drank it anyways and MY GOD...

“You’re in for it now,” Ed shrieked behind him, “because Colonel Spanky has come to town!”


I laughed...and laughed...and laughed and ...my god i had tears ROLLING down my face...it must have been a good 10 MUNUTES before i could start reading again... *shakes head* You are TALENTED! lmao

And then and then...*shocked* he was chucking the phonographs everywhere and i was like NOOOO!!! *hands on cheeks* BAD EDWARD!!! and i laughed when Al had that frightened ramble to Roy on the phone...i do that sometimes... lol

All in all...EXCEPTIONAL chapters!! I love this story BEYOND belief.. (yes...seriously...) If i owned the series i would make THIS fiction into a little series all of its own... *clasps hands* I love it so.

Kepp up the...*insert good describe-y words here...lol...ajectives?*

Hellagoddess

REALLY GOOD!!!Update soon, PLEASE!

Aw, Ed, why do you have to be so bad. XD More more!!

this story is so adorable...and sexy...please tell me more chapters are coming out and soon!!!!

I am overwhelmed by the genuine thought you put behind this very real fic! I couldn\'t get over how cute and stubborn Ed was, and how seductive and patient Roy was! You captured a very real relationship between these two! It wasn\'t unrealistically WAFFy and it wasn\'t so angsty you wanted to choke and die! I just could not get enough of this! You are a very talented author and I wish I could give you more compliments, but it just wouldn\'t do your work justice! ^_^ I REALLY look forward to any other stories you might be hiding/writing at the moment! Really, I\'ll hunt you down and review every one of em! You\'re work is refreshing and innovative, and most importantly, genuine. It\'s the little things that build a relationship, and you made that very apparent with this story. I really can\'t tell you how proud I am of you about their supposed \"first time\", because honestly, I don\'t think anyone would be comfortable in that situation, especially someone as headstrong as Ed! I\'m also thrilled that you didn\'t make them fall into a sicky lust state where it seems like love, but it\'s not...what you built between them was authentic and deep. It made me go all nostalgic just thinking about it, and I remembered the imperfect first relationship I had! ^_^ So, I guess I want to say thank you for writing so wonderfully and sharing it with us common folk! It was a true pleasure!

I adore this story ^_^ The best that I\'ve ever read in this fandom! I check back for updates obsessively--it\'s really unhealthy ^_^; So update soon!

This has to be one of the most original takes on Ed and Roy getting together. I love the OC, and how she didn\'t take up too central of a role but was still important to the story. Your sence of humor is wonderful and Al is simply to die for. I love how witty you made him. I cannot wait to see more from you.

~Lady Sinistra

P.S.- If you\'re looking for a fic to pass the time with, I am the author of \'Fraternazation\' a Roy/Ed fic. I believe you\'ll enjoy it!

That almost made me cry. Almost. Alright, there were a few tears who ... well ... streamed down my face.