rate_review Reviews

I must say that I\'m quite in love with this. I love the humor in it but the fact that it also keeps the awkwardness of virgins. Ed\'s aversion (sp?) to cum amuses me greatly, and Mustang not wanting to waste it had me laughing aloud. I love the kink touch, and how it would be so like Ed to just leave Roy there and forget completely about him. I do like how you have people not exactly okay with their Adult/Child relationship at first. I\'ve realized that many people have everyone just okay with it without thinking about the taboo and how many people find it disgusting. It was refreshing to see this and read it where people don\'t exactly take it with stride but try and overcome it. I love the witty sense of humor Al has in here and how he can one up Ed most of the time, and his knowledge of sex, as well as blutness with it, being larger than Ed\'s is too cute. The book reading is something I can seriously see him doing. Ed and Roy\'s banter is amusing, and I like how its in character with the two of them because its something they seem to do a lot. I cannot wait to see where you go with this, its mix of humor and angst has me intrigued as well as hooked *nodnod*

You had me totally scared there for a sec. o____o!! More?? more??? ^_________^

Lol, sorry, that last \'anon\' comment was me. :P

Oh shiiiii that was incredible. No words.

I love you!

Marry me? :D :D :D

Oh! Loved it! Awesome chapter!

“How I relish the chance of actually missing you, FullMetal,” the Colonel said easily, “I’d really like to know what having a pain-free ass feels like.”


this absolutely cracked me up! it\'s so awesome how they have this little dialogue when they\'re in the office...makes me laugh and go all \'squeal-y\'

And i loved the fact that Roy didn\'t go in for the...uh...well...score when he could have...cause i could tell it was from guilt too...lmao! YAY! Go ROY!!! *cheers*

Hope to read another update soon!

Hellagoddess

that was....hiarious!...that is all

Oh my god, this fic is so good! It has every element in it, and it\'s insanely funny! I am eagerly waiting for more...good job!

Love, love, love it! It just keeps getting better and weirder all the time! Made me laugh out lout in a library crowded with people, quite embarrassing... Thank you!

Oh god, the spanking scene was so wonderful. MORE OMG PLEEEASE!!!!

Oh. MY. GOD. I JUST have to say that this is BY FAAAAR the BEST and MOST wonderful FMA fiction i have EVER read!! I am at a complete loss to find the words to describe how much i love this story...everything about it...

...just...

...wow

PLEASE keep updating! i check every day and absolutely LOVE the fact you update so quickly...*shakes head* i just can\'t get over how much i love this story...words fail me...

Keep up the fantastically amazing work...

Hellagoddess