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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, just tell me how did you manage to make me like this fic if I hate Roy Mustang. Oh, yes, must be the wonderfull writting, or the hylarious bad sex scenes, or how cute you make Ed, or how patient Roy is. Yes, must be that.
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done :D Very well written and characterized! Incredibly patient you are with Ed :D Simply wonderful.
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OM MY FING GOD! I laughed and cried my ass off! Superb! Brilliant! This is without a doubt one of the best stories I have read! The chemistry between Ed and Roy is absolutely amazing, and you\'ve giveb Al a great deal of maturity while still maintianing himin character. I loved the kitty chasing scene, and when Ed left Roy tied up I literaly snorted water up my nose. Wow, just wow. More, please dear god more.
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit. This is the best Full Metal Alchemist fanfic I have ever read. You are a true star. Lol. Anyway. Keep on the good work. I really DO NOT want this story to end. ;)
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Absolutely awesome!! LOVED that chapter!! Loved everything about it, especially the ending!!
Keep up the amazing work!! I love this fiction!!
Hellagoddess
Keep up the amazing work!! I love this fiction!!
Hellagoddess
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story. Why?
1) Had a plot, and a good one
2) It was realistic...romance, comedy, with a small touch of angst and not overly romantic. It was very relaxed and sweet
3) Great writing style, I found myself both leaning forward completely absorbed and laughing outloud.
Great piece of work! Please write again soon!
1) Had a plot, and a good one
2) It was realistic...romance, comedy, with a small touch of angst and not overly romantic. It was very relaxed and sweet
3) Great writing style, I found myself both leaning forward completely absorbed and laughing outloud.
Great piece of work! Please write again soon!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incredibly hot, but so so so evil. MORE MORE PLEAAASE!! *begs*
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha LOL LOL ROTGL
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHA! Poor Roy...and poor Ed when Roy gets back at him later. Good job i love this chapter. can\'t waite for the next one.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am amazed at the quality of this story. The only thing that saddens me is that roy has never just bent ed over and done him right out. Maybe soon eh ^_^