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i think my heart stop while i was readding
this is great am gald here a part to:)

I know I have probably reviewed this story before. But I just re-read it, and it is one of the most amazing pieces of fiction I have read, and ties for the best piece of fanfiction (of any genre) that I have read. The othe one was a lord of the rings, and therefore apples and oranges, so you have the best anime fanfiction I have ever read, and I am a huge fan of gundam wing, and we all know how many of those fanfictions are out there. I must congratulate you, i feel i was along with Roy and Ed on their emotional rollercoaster, not many stories do that. I wish that they could give you an award for this story because you deserve it!

I can already tell this is going to be fun.

I love the wordplay of the title, "Sex ED teacher". Hehehe.

This is SOOOO cute. it's so real. THIS is what a real good first time is like. not like how all the other authors have it written. The insecurity and the fear and hesitancy and the SHYNESS that Ed exibits is how it really is for a fifteen year old who doesn't know what they're getting into exactly, when they are with someone who wants to give and not take, and teach them. I felt like i was reading about my own first time with the emotions and the slowness that you used, and that's really saying something. Except that i'm a girl... but still, a nieve fifteen year old who doesn't even know exactly what sex really entails is what you described so well, i was amazed. this is fantastic! and all in one chapter? Kudos to you! I can tell you spent a lot of time getting this right. i didn't find any mistakes at all. GREAT JOB! You're a stunning author!

Fantastic story- wonderful writing- can't stop reading!

You're such an amazing writer! This story got me into the RoyxEd couple and even inspired me to write my own fic. Aaand wow I just realized there's a sequal *squeals and runs off to read it*

it's a pretty ok fic, just slight problems when the characters came out of character. i liked how you handled alphonse character when he got his flesh back, i could imagine him reacting that way in the series. i didn't particularly enjoy the limes though because this story was supposed to coincide with your title, and your limes didn't justify the title. disregarding the title though, it's a good story.

I really didn't exect this to be like this. I really expected smut but this was much better. I love how you made this this story made me feel emotions I felt cold and my heart hurt when It called or it amd I turned happy in others. I also like even if all these other things happened it still went back to the beginning. excelent story I'm glad I didn't skip it

i just loved it!!! Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful roy/ed fic with everyone! much appreciation to you! =D

That has got to be one of the best fanfiction I have ever read. You are a wonderful writer. I especially enjoyed Ed and Alphonse's reunion. Ed and Roy make a great couple! XD I can't wait to read your other stories!