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I Loves you!!!

You're writing is absolutely priceless. Especially this...
"Roy saw fireworks, he saw goddamn fireworks. His whole body contracted to one madly throbbing point between his legs and took all his rational with it, and it wasn’t just a lick, Ed smacked his damn lips. Heaven? Hell? Which is it? I don’t know anymore. Help. Somebody help. Somebody come in here and make Ed lick me again."
You manage to capture the humor in sex and have it still be arousing... so like reality. Bravo!

Uwa~~~ That was a really nice ending! Poor Al has to play the maid X3...

Wonderful story. My Favorite part was when Ed destoryed the cow. I had to stop reading, I was laughing so hard. (Which could be a problem on my part)

i loved this story. it was just so awesome!! hell i wish it hadnt ended. i had to stop reading in ther middle and the story haunted me all night i just had to finish early in the morning! eexcellent job you should write a lot more!

I loved this story. I haven't seen the movie, and I could handle this being the actual ending!

The Adventures of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher? That title does not do this epic love story (love story!) justice. But then, that's Roy's sense of humor all the way. (And your's too, I suspect.)

I don't know where to start...

Maybe just with this: this is the most incredible piece of fan fiction I have ever read in my life...

It has affected me so totally that even at work, talking with people, I am impatient for them to go away... so I can go back to thinking about this story some more... And all through work, I can only think about getting back home to read the next chapter. (As I write this, I am up to 15 and feel blessed to have 6 more to read... Is that silly?)

I am in LOVE with this story - and in love with THEM in love with each other. I was already in love with Ed, but now I see him and experience him the way that Roy does. I feel every emotion they do, every bit of helpless want that they do. And it's More...

You are a master and so, so good at what you've done here that I have to remind myself that this isn't canon. Because it should be. In fact, THIS should be the Fullmetal Alchemist movie. Seriously.

I could wax further, and no doubt I will at some point, about how you've depicted each and every character, and built on what Arakawa-san created. And you render Ed so believably, so perfectly, so clearly... Hard not to love him and want to throttle him and love him again. And Roy... is, simply, perfect. Oh what amazing patience that man has. To wait so long when his need is so great. How has he not just ... taken him. How could any man, love or not, so affected by his lover, so moved by him, hold himself back as he does? I... I am amazed. By him. By them. By all of it.

I want to print this and carry it with me so I can read it whenever, wherever I am.

Good God, this is good.

Amazed and moved. (Thank you.)

Irene

You know what I have found funny, no one seemed to comment about the little word gag you did in chapter seven.....anyway I thought it was cute. ^_^ the smiley bandit

Simply. Superb. XxXxX

Hi.

I've seen this fic for a while, but always passed it over because of the title. Today, for some reason, I decided to read it.
I"m glad I did.
This has got to be one of the best pieces of fiction I've read. As a love story it was flawless, and I must say I'm disappointed that it's over. Very, very disappointed, as a matter of fact. Your characterization was wonderful, and the story flowed seamlessly from one thing to the other, all with a sense of realism and time that's usually lacking in fanfiction. I bow to a master of the craft.

Writegirl :)