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wow... this was an amazing story... i chuckled, laughed, rolled around hysterically, mooned over roy/ed sweetness, drooled over roy/ed hotness, teared up and almost cried, only to be brought back to my previous moony grin at the end... i'm so glad i suddenly got in the mood for an fma fic and without even telling her, one of my best friends, Houseki, IMed me and told me i HAD to read this! there are soooo many things i loved about it, and i'd love to quote my favorite parts, but i'd end up practically c+ping the whole damn fic into this review lol (and i know already from experience, as i was c+ping into Houseki's IM and commenting on my fav parts lol) amazing job you did, and i can't wait to read the sequel i've been told about as well.. so here i go to do that and spend another couple days ignoring what i should be writing myself and ignoring sleep to read your awesome work lol

~ lg

*Bows down humbly at the feet of the greatest FMA Fic-ka ever!*

Yeah wow...I have been obsessed with this fic for the last three days trying to read it without stopping but..sleep and work some how get in the way, but I finally finished it today and I'm like "Thank Goddess for the Sequel!"

I haven't been in much of a FMA fic mood but since I've read every Naruto fic with multi-chaps there is here I decided to take a looksy here. And OMGoddess I'm so glad I did! My friend who was sitting at the end of my bed who was to be WRITING her fics kept pausing to read the story even though I was already like 13 chaps in and she CAN NOT wait to read it from just the bits she's seen and all the lines ladygizarme and I have told her!

Every character was dead on and the comic relief was so great and not over done whatsoever. It was playful, sweet, sad, angsty, sexy, and amazing all at once. It was so nice that you had them wait to actually make love so much later in the story, and how romantic it was. Roy was just too damn perfect in this story. It wasn't an overyplayed "in love". You could actually take the real character and see him in this story fully. That is what makes you a great fic-ka. I'm just itching to get to the next story! And I hope you continue writing fics and perhaps even dabble a little bit in other animes. That would rock ^__^

Much much kudos to you on a great job! And you'll be seeing me soon in another review for the sequel ^__~

Mata Ja!

~Houseki

Spot-on characterization, an engrossing story that sucked me in and held me there, and almost seamless workings around the plot of the series...Final Review: Best. Alchemist. Fic. EVAR.

Oh, and the love scenes were hot too. ^_^

nooooooooooooooooooooo don´t say its the end! it cant be! more evil chappies of ed and roy just humping their brains out.... sob... think thats the end of my reading lesson with my dutch lessons in class... ) thank god i can take my laptop in to school


wellllllll wish there is another story attached to this one... cant wait!


bye bye

Make love to me pleeeeeeeeeeeeeese

Damn!!!! This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read and it is the best Fullmetal Alchemist Fanfiction I have ever read. You have a real talent for writing and I can't wait to read your other stories.

I love you. I want to be involved in the making of your babies though not in a sexual manner. That was THE BEST Fullmetal Alchemist Fanfiction I have EVER read. I had to fight down a sob reflex when I found out it was finished. Holy shit. The song at the end, I've read it before in a Harry Potter fanfiction but where that was literal what with him trying to get Snape to jump his bones this was much more sweet and humurous. I love your style of writing and your story line even though you sometimes left out words or put them in an odd order, or just put to many of the same word in. You've lured me into the web that is your Author page and now I must explore to find other stories you've written in a bid to sate my thirst for good authors.

Hopelessly yours,
Itaika-san

This is an amazing, well written fiction. Love it. ^_^

I can see that my last comment to this story is gone with a couple of others. So I'll make a new one because it's such a awesome story and it need to be appreciated! So I'll tell you one more time that this is the BEST RoyxEd story I have EVER read. I mean, I've looked out for a story like this for a long time, and when I read the three first chapters of this story, you owned me. You totally OWNED ME! As I said I was looking for a story like this, and I hell you delivered! The first thing I did when I got home from school was turning on my computer and read. I always looked forward to it. And I still do. You're brilliant, excellent! I love you and your story! Keep on writing!

Thank you, thank you SO much for sharing this story with me, with us! THANK YOU!

This was an awesome story. I really loved the humor and the drama; you are really good at both. I'm so glad you made a sequel to this. I'll definitely be reading that.