rate_review Reviews

*sobs* Now I can't finish this story or it will spoil the show. I mean I know sort of what happens but still. DARN YOU! Why did you have to be such a skilled writer? maybe next story just endless roy/ed smutt that doesnt follow the story line?

I absolutely love this story, Skydark. I read the beginning of it on LJ then lost it... *pout* But happy to see it here! I love reading your stuff (and your fun stuff involving Velvet.) You make your stories seem alot LIKE an anime... random funny things and not just smooth times and smooth sex. Keep posting more here! ^^

I love you and this story!

That was a truly evil place to stop.

Very, very good story! I love the humor and the interplay between Ed and Roy... It's a joy to read the bits where they're feeling around each other's foibles and idiosyncracies, and coming to terms with them... Oh, and the romance is hot, too. *grin* I only have one quibble, and it's mainly with the latest chapters. You tend to start off in the past tense and then suddenly jump into present. Ex: Roy watched Edward as he danced. The boy sees him and beckons.

Now, this is a crappy example I made up, but you get the point, neh? :) It jars the whole narrative. Still, it's easily fixed, and the editing will make a fabulous story even more fabulous!

Hey, are there any spoilers that we should look out for?

*screams* EGH! How can you just leave it there! *Screams again* What happened to this nice little story that made me giggle. It made me cry. Wow your mean! *cries again* Poor poor Roy...*hugs him* I want another chapater. No i NEED another one..Your so friggin mean! If you wheren't suchy a wonderful author i'd strangle you!

Ahh!! I am anxious with anticipation. o_____o Update please!

You know, I was re-reading the previous chapter last night (how sad am i? LOL!) and really, I don't believe in love... but such a strange feeling when Roy said he loved Ed, I was SO moved, I can't even explain why, it was just beautiful. I loooove you!

Saw it at your livejournal, saw it again at the LJ Communtiy: FAM Yaoi, saw it everywhere and also here! I love you, your icons and most of all, your wonderfully evil-yet-so-good yaoi fics.

I absolutly positivly love you.

Hello again, I just wanted to say that don't mind the idiotic D/H who posted on 2005-11-26. Yeh, he just doesn't appricate a good story but don't worry everyone else does. ^-^