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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I haven't reviewed your story before~ but I should've! It's great and wonderful and awesome and AHH I LOVE HOW YOU UPDATE IT EVERYDAY. <3
Anyway, anyway, can't wait 'til the next chapter~
Anyway, anyway, can't wait 'til the next chapter~
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;_; I have tears in my eyes. But the sex scene was totally beautiful
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! WHY DO ALL THE REALLY GOOD STORIES HAVE SAD ENDINGS.........please tell me either a this ends happy YAY or you gonna do a sequal that ends happy. sniff sniff sniff please. *gives big cute puppy dog eyes* sigh this is one of the best stories with this pair that I have read, and it looks like its gonna make me sob like a baby. *sniffs and walks away to stock up on tissue for the upcoming chapter. "will also need copious amounts of chocolate and something to snuggle against while reading. Why is she doing this to us." sniff sniff* you are so mean. grrrrrr.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I made a heart thing and it ate the rest of my comment -o-;
But anyway! As I was saying after that heart and the internet ate the rest of it...
You have great, great, GREAT writing. I don't know what that D/H person's thing is... because I don't think they know anything BECAUSE this whole Roy-and-Ed-are-really-just-masturbation-buddies is part of your plot, and you're doing it on purpose, and there IS a reason that they're not doing it. Anyway, it's great writing xD I can picture everything perfectly and I laugh when it's funny, I cry when it's sad, and you just capture the emotions so skillfully~. Wah, I wish I could write like this... @O@ Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
But anyway! As I was saying after that heart and the internet ate the rest of it...
You have great, great, GREAT writing. I don't know what that D/H person's thing is... because I don't think they know anything BECAUSE this whole Roy-and-Ed-are-really-just-masturbation-buddies is part of your plot, and you're doing it on purpose, and there IS a reason that they're not doing it. Anyway, it's great writing xD I can picture everything perfectly and I laugh when it's funny, I cry when it's sad, and you just capture the emotions so skillfully~. Wah, I wish I could write like this... @O@ Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay review number two after reading some other reviews:
Personally I love they way you have drawn out the relationship and that you did not have them just jump in and go for it like rabbits. Anyone can write that. What is difficult to write is a story that captivates its readers and leaves them wanting more. Sweet love stories are seriously lacking in the fanfic world and I must say I have been waiting for this kind of story, that I didn't have to write myself ^_^. Not that I have ever let anyone read any of them, ofcourse, and they are sooooooo not near this good. So while we are all entitled to our opinions yay, and i do love a pwp, I just wanted to let you know that your story is a very enjoyable experience to read, just as it is, there were moments that I could not stop laughing at and moments that make me cry. (note: still need to get tissues for next chapter.) My freinds have even caught me giggling as a moment jumps back into my head at work. Needless to say I just wave them off and continue to giggle. ^_^. So ahem.........PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY. *hypnotize swirlys appear........you want to continue and make a happy ending......you want to continue and make a happy ending........ (is it working yet?)* anyway looking forward to the next installment. (grabs tissue box, and chocolate) :O)
Personally I love they way you have drawn out the relationship and that you did not have them just jump in and go for it like rabbits. Anyone can write that. What is difficult to write is a story that captivates its readers and leaves them wanting more. Sweet love stories are seriously lacking in the fanfic world and I must say I have been waiting for this kind of story, that I didn't have to write myself ^_^. Not that I have ever let anyone read any of them, ofcourse, and they are sooooooo not near this good. So while we are all entitled to our opinions yay, and i do love a pwp, I just wanted to let you know that your story is a very enjoyable experience to read, just as it is, there were moments that I could not stop laughing at and moments that make me cry. (note: still need to get tissues for next chapter.) My freinds have even caught me giggling as a moment jumps back into my head at work. Needless to say I just wave them off and continue to giggle. ^_^. So ahem.........PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY. *hypnotize swirlys appear........you want to continue and make a happy ending......you want to continue and make a happy ending........ (is it working yet?)* anyway looking forward to the next installment. (grabs tissue box, and chocolate) :O)
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I'm SO glad I managed to finish this chapter before I left. Squee! <3 Now I can go see the Harry Potter movie and be elated, yet sad at the same time. I know little of hat happens in the final episod. I know it's not good, though. A 'bye-bye, Edward' type of thing that makes all Ed fangirls cry. *sigh* Well, gotsta go. Loved it bunches. ^_^
--Haywire
--Haywire
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, just wow, holy crap that last chapter was just beautiful! I really hope you continue this to the post movie era, ie when Ed finally gets back, and Roy is Fuher... but even if you don't that was wonderful
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again, amazing. I love this and I am going to be so sad when it comes to an end.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'I would have thought that in our long association as siblings, that somewhere down the line you would have figured out that I am immune to your bullshit.' LMAO! That was priceless!!! I nearly spat out my soda on my laptop when I read that!
That was genius, making Al something of a smartass! Hell, I'm still giggling now over how Havoc tried to blackmail Mustang, but due to his natural bad luck, couldn't even get any poon nanny if it brought to him! *laughing uncontrollably* I am loving this fic! It's like you have the right mix of angst and humor. Keep it up! EM ^_^
That was genius, making Al something of a smartass! Hell, I'm still giggling now over how Havoc tried to blackmail Mustang, but due to his natural bad luck, couldn't even get any poon nanny if it brought to him! *laughing uncontrollably* I am loving this fic! It's like you have the right mix of angst and humor. Keep it up! EM ^_^
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I mean... wow. It's amazing. You're writing is great. One of the best stories I've ever read. Your voice is amazing, and how you keep the character's personalities in check throughout the story is talented. You keep to the actual story line, but add in your story through the whole plot. It's all so up to date, even to the last episodes.
I was laughing through almost the entire story. It had a lot of funny quirks that were just hilarious. Like when Ed's about to say I love you, and Roy wakes up. 'There's meatloaf in the icebox.' That line was so funny, I couldn't get over it for days. Sorry if I sound like I'm exaggerating or going a little overboard.
I was laughing through almost the entire story. It had a lot of funny quirks that were just hilarious. Like when Ed's about to say I love you, and Roy wakes up. 'There's meatloaf in the icebox.' That line was so funny, I couldn't get over it for days. Sorry if I sound like I'm exaggerating or going a little overboard.