rate_review Reviews

Good story,I can\'t wait for the next chapter!Update soon

seems good so far, keep up the good work, kay?

This fiction sounds very interesting friend!!!! Im a fervent tyka/kaitaka shipper myself so hehhe. Hmm well hey i gots an idera if you want i can beta read your story and fix grammar errors for you before you update^^ English is not my mothertongue but it is my second language so i know it by heart^^ Just send me an email if you\'d like for me to beta it for you! :)

Okaaay... It was a little short, like you said, and in my opinion it went too fast. Slow down a bit, don\'t rush it all through in that small space. But I\'m waiting you to update.