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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! An update! WHOOT! And they finally got to it!
Lovely lemon dear. LOL...Goku's reaction to Vegeta being an ease dropper was funny. Goku answering the door nake while Bulma standing there was classic!
I hope to see more of this soon! Thank you for the Xmas present! I hope you have great holidays.
Lovely lemon dear. LOL...Goku's reaction to Vegeta being an ease dropper was funny. Goku answering the door nake while Bulma standing there was classic!
I hope to see more of this soon! Thank you for the Xmas present! I hope you have great holidays.
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June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 was a little slow, but it did have some valid plot points that had to be written.
Chapter 6 got this thing rolling along nicely again! :) I do like watching the different interactions. Vegeta was very insightful to have made Goku stay behind. Now I just hope they can stop any unwanted attentions Marc may give Videl.
WHOOT, glad to see this update!
Chapter 6 got this thing rolling along nicely again! :) I do like watching the different interactions. Vegeta was very insightful to have made Goku stay behind. Now I just hope they can stop any unwanted attentions Marc may give Videl.
WHOOT, glad to see this update!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I've read like three or so of your fics. I do owe you some reviews. I'll get to those. One thing though. THESE are fricken' awesome. Please update soon. Ok. Gonna go read more of these now.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL... That last statement, What would Pan think? Oh, I think it is going to really mess with her young mind if it does happen, but I hope it does!
As is usually the case in such situations, everyone seems to know but the two people who are being gossiped about. LOL.
There were quite a few typos in this chapter. I don't know if that was the site or your error, but I thought I'd let you know.
Great update, I hope to see more soon.
As is usually the case in such situations, everyone seems to know but the two people who are being gossiped about. LOL.
There were quite a few typos in this chapter. I don't know if that was the site or your error, but I thought I'd let you know.
Great update, I hope to see more soon.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2
I like the concept of Gohan being selected for a Kai. At one point in the DB or DBZ series, Kami had offered Goku the office, but Goku had refused. This is just a step away from that.
I do feel sorry for Videl, but I certainly wasn't expecting Vegeta to welcome her with open arms. I guess it really has been a long time since Goku left.
Now on to chapter 3.
I like the concept of Gohan being selected for a Kai. At one point in the DB or DBZ series, Kami had offered Goku the office, but Goku had refused. This is just a step away from that.
I do feel sorry for Videl, but I certainly wasn't expecting Vegeta to welcome her with open arms. I guess it really has been a long time since Goku left.
Now on to chapter 3.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WhaoHoooo! A G/Vi with a plot. *Big Smiles* Very nice, and I am certainly interested in seeing how it turns out.
Do me a favor and email me will ya?
Do me a favor and email me will ya?
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is gohan out of the story for good? Looking forward to the next chapter.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, i would definitely want to read more
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very intreging (or however you spell that). You built up the suspence enough now I feel I HAVE to know what Gohan is talking about. I hope that Videl isn\'t just going to go by the way side after this. I don\'t mean that she and Gohan get back together, but I\'d like to see what she does with her life after this life shaking moment.
Hope to see more of this soon.
Hope to see more of this soon.