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September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the story it was well written and exciting.
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it! u need to finish it. i have been reading it now stop. pleass continue it. i want to know what vichita doses.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!! This is such a super fanfic!! It's great!! I really, really, reallu love it!! You need to write more!!
Otherwise I'll come to you, beat your ass, beat it again and then make you write more!! :P
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Otherwise I'll come to you, beat your ass, beat it again and then make you write more!! :P
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is great. I love it. I think that Bulma squeals to much. She sounds like pig or something. Other than that, I think your a great writer and your story is wonderful.