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Wow, a sequel to Our Father!! its just that i got the impression that all trowa gave quatre in Our Father was a hand job. does this make him a rapist or a molester? hehehe. i love the idea of this fic, and am so looking forward to how it will pan out. except that there is very little as of this point that says of how quatre and duo got together. and poor quatre! please update asap.

I\'m glad it will be longer! Cuz I think that\'s what got me with the first one, it was just one chapter and I wanted to know more. So i\'m very enthusied to see how this will turn out. So Quat and Duo are together, hmm Duo referred to him as \'friend\' near the end instead of lover or some other equally involved word. So they were friends all along? I wonder what happen to get them together? Was it right after he left the church? Duo said Q-bean was more aggressive... so did he just come up to him and suggest.. tell Duo lets get together. *smiles* I\'d like to read more of this soon.

I see you found a beta. I\'m happy for you. ^_^ And while this fic is a little more depressing than I usually like to read, I am still waiting to see where it goes. I have a hard time seeing Quatre and Trowa in this type of light, not because of the way you write them, but because of my own pre-conceived thoughts about the characters in question. And I think that *that* is why I\'m reading this fic. I love it when an author challenges my views. I love to see if they can weave their story well enough to make me see things their way in their story. You have a great, if short, beginning. Keep it up! ~NekuYasha

i like this story. keep writing
and please make your chapters longer. they r so short