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by michellegaeta

person Sunburst
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story. I'm probably going to stay up all night reading it.
person Sunburst
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"He relaxed slightly, so this was about money, you never knew a persons real demean ore until the almighty Zeni was at stake."

LMAO
person Sunburst
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well this sucks lol
person Sunburst
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Thank you so much. One of my fav couples.
person Sunburst
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"She loved Trunks to distraction, but he had touched on the one thing she could never understand. He was after all an alien." LOL

I'm already hooked in. You're a very talented writer.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I loved this story. I love Trunks and Pan
pairings and to be honest, I think I read this
story a year or two ago but couldn't remember.
It was fabulous. I wish there were more like it.
I hope that one day you could edit some of the
spelling and grammar errors, but other than that,
it was great. I'll have to check out any other
stories that you might have.
person Nalurah
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, here I am! The insane reviewer from your stories on Fanfiction. The challenge begins as I will begin to read the first chapter of this adult story. Ok I confess, I haven't read it yet, I just wanted to let you know that you can expect more insane reviews from me.
Maybe it is time for you to run for cover... muahahahahaha!
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can write a sequel to this story please?
person AMAZED
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh i beg you, please fix up your format, its so difficult to read if not annoying. If i didnt love your story i would flame you over it. PLEASE
person Dan
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!!!!Great!!!!Wonderful!!!!
Excellent!!!!Brillant!!!Amazing!!!!
Absolutely fucking Perfect!!!!!!!!!

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