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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only have one suggestion (it wasn an awesome story btw) but your formatting was horrible, to make this fic just that little bit better, you should go back over it and re-edit it with proper grammar and format it in the correct manner so it's way easier to read. That'd make this fic about 10 times better than what it is (and what's alot.) :P
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing. i loved it. i cant wait for more. this has got to be the best P/T fic i have ever read.. all i have to do is find more PAN/VEG fics. anyway. i thought that this is a great fic.
one thing though. Chichi is a princess in Dragonball and her father is a King (it is not just his name) so doesnt that count for status for Goten. i mean he is a Prince. there is a myth that Chichi's mother was a demon but i am not sure.
good luck
may kami-sama be with you
one thing though. Chichi is a princess in Dragonball and her father is a King (it is not just his name) so doesnt that count for status for Goten. i mean he is a Prince. there is a myth that Chichi's mother was a demon but i am not sure.
good luck
may kami-sama be with you
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?