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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
updaaaaaate! This is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read!
in Liebe, Red Tail
in Liebe, Red Tail
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Simply amazing! ^________^ *glomps author* I love this story! The flashbacks are timed perfectly with the story!
in Liebe, Red Tail
in Liebe, Red Tail
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon. It's really good. Want to know what happens next.
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Lesson of the Chapter: Watching Heero’s ass will get you into trouble...'
Haha yea! lol I just read the first chapter, that's pretty good. I like and i'm so happy that there's two more chapters to read.
Haha yea! lol I just read the first chapter, that's pretty good. I like and i'm so happy that there's two more chapters to read.
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*screams @ chapter II* man... no ...*sniffles*
I love the little chapter lessons
I love the little chapter lessons
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ireally do enjoy this story, the whole thing about Duo being blond in the beginning I overlooked, but yea um.. Duo has chestnut hair... but the story and the interplay between Heero and Duo is wonderful so please, please update this baby soon!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heero will make it right......? please let it be so! update again soon!
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!!
A very good story - but for Pit's sake, give Duo his hair colour back - he's not blond, he's hair is chestnut - and it's very confusing to read.
I love your chapter lessons very much – esp. the last one, dildo should be really huge for that.
Anyways, hope you'd continue soon - dying to read more and find out how's Heero. BTW - I'm not very bright, so could you explain who made the love confession - Heero or Duo??
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A very good story - but for Pit's sake, give Duo his hair colour back - he's not blond, he's hair is chestnut - and it's very confusing to read.
I love your chapter lessons very much – esp. the last one, dildo should be really huge for that.
Anyways, hope you'd continue soon - dying to read more and find out how's Heero. BTW - I'm not very bright, so could you explain who made the love confession - Heero or Duo??
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well it's interesting so far, though I don't recall Duo's hair being blonde. It's more a chestnut I believe. My only criticism is that it's kind of hard to read because all the sentences and paragraphs are joined together like one big long paragraph - there is no spacing. If possible, try to put some spacing between your paragraphs.