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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I see that you only post two chapters for story Please continue with this it. I am a big mpreg fan so please keep on writing and update soon.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay, this has bardock in it. a prenant one. i always like to see bardock! =O
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it pleas keep going
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAH. O___O
You have -got- to continue!
You have -got- to continue!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, poor Bardoc! Please continue. It seems that your grammar and story line are good, which makes the story itself good and I can't wait to see where this thing is going.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This could get very interesting. Keep writing! I hope Bardock and the baby are okay! And could the father be the King....I can't wait to find out!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... So discriptive. I've been on hills like that before, and you wrote that so amazingly life like. I hope you contiunue with suck depth of detail through out the story (even if that makes it so much longer than you had planned.)
Well done! I can't wait to see more.
Well done! I can't wait to see more.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice me like the chapater i can't wait to see how bordack survives or if he survives.