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September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. It was very short, simple an sweet.
However, I think you put the last chapter (chapter 4) on the wrong story. It looks like it belongs on your "Untamed" story. Just thought you should know.
However, I think you put the last chapter (chapter 4) on the wrong story. It looks like it belongs on your "Untamed" story. Just thought you should know.
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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed this! Thanks! Very original
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so hot update soon!
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this story on Insaiyan and I absolutely love it. The way in which you described Bulma and Vegeta gave me crystal clear pictures in my head. Also the humor had me laughing along with the excellent character depth. Having Vegeta and Bulma interact in their 'old' forms was priceless. I can't wait to see a sequel. I think one of my favorite moments was the description of how he realized he was wearing a scouter, next to the afterglow scene when t hey'd made love. So many good things I enjoyed about the story it's hard to name them all here!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I love it! Keep writing!