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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH!!!!!! you left a cliffy. are you trying to kill me. what ever i dont care just update soon please. oh by the way great chapter :-)
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just read the story think its hot hope to see more dont give up:)
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God i love this story!! please please please continue. i really want to know how this is all going to turn out.
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a friend told me to read this story because she thought it was hot so i did and i agree with her. your story is awsome so please update again soon. i cant wait to read the next chapter.
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice fic. not a lot of people do a pan and trunks story so it is good to see one. i happen to like that couple best so i hope you dont give up and update again soon.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write somemore chapters?
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is going great to what I think. And it is like the first DBZ fic that I've read. oh and please try to watch some of your spelling every once in a while. hope you could update soon. ill be looking forward to reading more. Ja ne.