rate_review Reviews

Wow... seriously good story. The whole vegeta's past thing at the beginning... but you didn't make it angsty, or dreary. You know, the sort of vegeta history that drags on and on forever. This was way good :)

That was amazing...I am truly speechless. I hope you keep writing!

Beautiful - simply beautiful. It made me sigh with pleasure. Wonderful description - not porn or smut, but care and affection. *bows*

Wow.... *is silent for a moment*.........

..... Wonderful imagery, insight and descriptions, without dragging any of them out. You made your points stand out without shouting them or hammering them home.

I am certainly encouraging you to write either more of this... or more of something with these two. You did an excellent job.

I really did like the difference between how Vegeta saw the world and how Goku saw the world. Very nice.

I had to laugh at Vegeta's threat. Indeed, destined by whom?

Outstanding. I loved the way it all flowed so naturally and effortlessly. It made me smile at almost two am, which is an achievement all on its own. Amazing.

i like that it was deep