rate_review Reviews

I love you. Yes I do. I love you so much. Because you're such a goddamn good author and because yeah, that's why. Your writing always amaze me, and I have absolutely no idea how you do it. Do you read my fucking mind? Because this is a story I've always wanted. Not those 'one-shots' were Roy does Ed and they lived happily ever after. You made a fucking story, yes you did. And that story (both this and The Adventure of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher) was so good I'd die to read it again. And why the HELL haven't the stories been animated? For god's sake, let them be animated!

Thank you. Thank you so much for sharing the stories with us. I love you. Please write more about Roy and Edward. I've never ever in my goddamn life read such a great, good, lovely fanfic on FMA. On Roy and Ed. Yes, I am indeed saying that this is the best FMA fanfic I have EVER read. I hail you. You're like my god now. So please, please write more. I beg, I BEG YOU! Please please!

Yours Sincerely

Arra

Yay bed toy! XD Anyways great chapter, yu always amaze me with your chapters. Keep them coming =3

How did I know Ling would kick Ed's butt. Stillmad about that SECOND kiss! I hope Roy doesn't erupt all over the place because of it. Your story will definitely be worth the wait for chapter 17. Of course if the seasons change with no sign of an update, I might cry. Thank you is great story!

WTF!!!!!!WTF is WRONG With EDWARD ELRIC!!!! Kill Ling off!! & beat Ed...that arrogant, sniveling, ungrateful little snot! After everything Roy has done for him! You do not cheat on your partner becuase all of a sudden you feel like you haven't screwed around enough! oh...& let Al get laid already.

Something in my mind says that it'll be a while until I get to read chapter 17. I think I'm going to cry.

yay a new chapter already! so now ed knows ling wants the stone.. which i figured from the mention of it in a previous chapter, but what does he want it FOR i wonder?? hmm.... and HOW MUCH of ed's story does he know? *cocks brow* and he kissed ed AGAIN! and ed LET HIM?! ai yi yi, what's going to happen next?? will it happen again? will roy find out? ed won't let the prince mess things up with him and roy will he???? well, at least things are still good between them now, and ed realized he only needs one love anyway.. i hope he continues remembering that.. i so await the next chapter!!

oh yeah, another thing i wanted to say about this chapter: i can't wait for roy to get back to his alchemy! i'm so glad otto talked him into trying... even if he can't use precision, i hope he can still be badass and flashy and dance for ed (and all of us! ^__~ )

ok, so i read the first one just the other day, and already i've caught up to what you have posted of the sequel, and once again i'm just in awe of your wonderful storytelling ability, your attention to detail, perfect characterizations, and even the OCs you have are interesting enough to pull you into their story.. i especially love reading about Ed teaching, and the boys in his class... i can't wait to see how the exhibition goes and i just plain can't wait for more story, of EVERYONE'S storyline you have going!! hope there's more soon!!

~ lg

Edward's little 'I'm-not-gay' speach was hilarious! I want more.

Yuck... I think the genius of this story lies in the fact that the author is capable of making a storyline believable to the series and I certainly don't see Ed being pregnant as believable or desirable at all. With that sidenote taken care of, this is a wonderful addition and I'm happy that everything is out in the open and Ed and Roy aren't fighting anymore. Roy's sadness was very sweet and I loved seeing Al and Riza finally take a shot at the whole date thing. Overall, I think this is one of my favorite chapters yet and look forward to seeing another wonderful update soon ^_^ This is the longest I've ever read any story and I think I'll have to cry when it does end. It's the highlight of my day to check for updates!