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I'm so glad Roy and Ed ain't fighting. Man, I love you. I want MORE.

Yet again another great story........and an evil place to stop. You are so mean. sigh I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome!! Finally we find out what happened to ed...

Your stories are really good so far! But i do have a suggetion, after better living through alchemy, you should do a sequal with an ed/roy m-preg with ed being the one carrying the child, you don't have to do it byut it is a challenge. Good luck! I know you can do it!

Wow. I'm literally holding my breath for more. It is unreal how well you've woven this story. Please continue!

Once again, claps for the phenomenal speed and quality of the updates... in other news OMG, envy. poor poor ed...

Gasp!!! OMG!! GAH!!! Update!! I mean i am in lost of words!! I mean hearing the last sentence Ed said...OMG!!!! I am speechless!! CHAPTER NOW!! NOW!!!!!! *grabs author my the collar and shakes violently* NOW!!!!!

I knew it would be terrible, but...DAMN! I almost cried No with Ed. Keep up this amazing fic.

WHAT THE HELL!? NOOOOO! Please let them be friends again!? I'll fucking kick that fucking bastard Ling's ass till the end of the world! You have to update soon, this drives me crazy. Please please please update. And that scene when they dance in the kitchen.. Awww.. So awesome, cute, brilliant, you name it. And I really hope they get some of that cake soon. Lol. I love you. And your story. Please update. Ciao!

I eagerly await each chapter. Your writing is very captivating and the attention to detail really brings everything to life. So many people forget about the little details that go into making a story more then just words on paper. I think it's all the small things that really bring a story and it's characters to life. You write the kind of long, intricately involved stories that I love to read. They bring out so many emotions, happiness, sadness, even tears occasionally. When I write (though I only write for my own selfish self, not being bold enough to brave the lion's den, because I want to put out work that people read and say wow, I want more), these are the types of stories I like to write. Stories where you feel that the characters are more then words on paper, stories that begin, go somewhere and end, whether happily ever after or not. So, keep up the great work and after this is finished, I hope that we will see more works of art from you. You truly do weave the dream into life.