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Man, that was intense! I loved it! I can't wait for you to update again!

Oh splendid! This is splendid! Your characterizations are amazing, and I just love your storyline. You're a very captivating writer, (you don't even have too many typos, which I notice, seems to happen a lot in on-line fanfics), and your detail is visual and striking. I really liked the discussions between "Al" and "Alphonse." I thought that that was a brilliant idea and also brilliantly executed. You're very witty, and that comes out through your writing. I like that you've stayed true to the characters, but at the same time you've fleshed them out very well, portraying a believable view of what they all might be like post-series. I am very much assuming that this is uncompleted, (I haven't checked the status on-line--I got so wrapped up in the story that I haven't taken the time) because I really want to know where Ed was for those six years, how things play out with the prince, and whether Al and Hawkeye get together. I'm sure Roy's machinations will also be interesting to see. I've also read "The Adventures of Roy Mustang, Sex Ed. Teacher," which was a delight, and I really appreciate that even though you have a nice catharsis of melancholy worked in, you still gave us readers a happy ending. I (despite what certain friends say) do NOT think happy endings are overrated, and I trust that you will finish this piece wringing heart strings along the way before wrapping things up in a delightfully surprising yet totally sensical and happy way. You are truly superb! (and *sigh* I don't talk like this, I just write like this, but I felt like I should take the time to bend my intelligence to my benefit to give you a well-worded and well-deserved review. So don't think me a dork for my vocabulary, which, to be fair to me, is what you see when I actually think before I iterate ideas). So time has been taken, and I hope that this review somewhat relays my pleasure at this, hmm, I think I can justifiably say literary piece. Frankly I would point out that I have read published novels that are not up to par with this piece. You're plotweaving is dynamic and exceptional (and a bit enviable), and I have stay I'm a stalwart fan and I hope to see more of this story soon!

Sincerely yours
Rachael

I've been bad and haven't been reviewing as I should. I've been up to my eyeballs in finals. Just wanted to let you know you're daily updates have been keeping me somewhat sane. >x< I'll review better when I have the time, just wanted to let you know how much I love this series. In fact I read it all the way through even though I should've been working. xD

Awesome as usual!! so cool, i love jealous Roy and the prince is starting to grow on me. interesting plotline btw, and evil Cliffy!! update soon

Ah~h! What a horrible cliffie you leave us with. >o< What will happen. Ah, I wanna know. Can't wait til your next update. x3

OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! That was too intense. Wow, you drive me crazy. That was worth the extra wait. Oh my god that didn't just happen. Wow. Ok, I'm okay now, you're a freaking fantastic writer! Please keep it up!

Your powers of update astound me, <3
was half afraid Ed's little gaggle of students would see him making out with roy and be all "The professors gay!...but he's cooll but he's gay!"
and have little mental breakdowns.
*worships you*

You're killing me Skydark! Roy knows Ling is after Ed, Ed knows Ling is after him, and Ling knows they know! However, I'm happy the party went off without incident, but at times I was twitching! Great job!The dance between Roy and Ed was so sweet, I swooned. Reason number 3,456 why Ling CANNOT have Ed. I love Roy's wheeling ways. Can't wait for tomorrow's update!

great update, i love the sneaky prince, so determined, about dang time roy figured out what was going on and decided to do something. love sarah, what a great character.

is al going to be with hawkeye or is his going to be with someone else?or is it going to be a surprise