rate_review Reviews

awesome story, such a great mix of angst and humor, very in keeping with the tone of the series itself.

Heh R.D peeing outside of their door. XD Loved the part of him listening outside. heh cute. Anyways please update soon, cannot wait to read more oh yeah ^^

Oh please let them make up soon, this chapter actually hurt me! Man, you're good at this! I wonder what Ed does with his time alone. Can Al come back? I hope this doesn't get any worse...although even if it did, I'll come crawling back each and every time cause you make it that good!

My god. Chapter 6 was an awesome chapter. Although, I really wanted to smack Alphonse for a while there. :P I hope you'll update soon, I can't wait to read what happens next.

Sorry that you had to lose all your reviews for this story thus far! That was a really nasty glitch. I loved your update, I hope Al doesn't try to whip up on Ed... With Ed's random explosions, I'd hate for him to accidentally club his brother to death for insulting his height during the fight with his metal arm. ^_^ I look forward to seeing Ed's take on all this and I really really enjoyed seeing Ed's gentler side again at Roy's mercy... Can't wait for them to finally reveal all their little secrets that I'm sure occured while they were seperate.

Looking forward to seeing some more! ^_~