rate_review Reviews

Beautiful ending to a wonderful story. I humbly thank you for sharing it with us. "I am your creature."

UPDATE DAMMIT! I know working full time can really cramp a persons style but you are killing us here! I re-read through BOTH stories twice! what will I do ith my free time now!?!!?

I love your work you are a excelent writter! The only thing I have ever notticed is that you mix up words, like using "think" instead of "thing" which could just be a typo, do you have a profreader? Anyways that is the only little problem I noticed and it really doesn't distract from it at all! I love Ed's out burst! Pure comedic gold! You really kepted people in character while expanding on the character. And you write excelent love scenes. And YES! Al finally got some! Go Al! Will there be more of that? PLEASE PLEASE?!!

EEEEE!!! K, that was probably uncalled for, but whatever. I am so glad I checked once before bed! Poor Gluttony, confused and lonely, just doesn't want to be alone. S'cool that Roy got his eye back though.

LMAO omg. i was just rereading the prequel and omg this is the most hilariously accurate paragraph ever! lol.

"The next day, Al dragged Ed out of bed at around noon and hustled him into a shower. He then toweled Ed’s hair dry and shoved him back into the room proper. He wrestled the familiar black tank top over Ed’s head, held Ed’s boxers and then pants for Ed to step into, and threaded his belt through the loops and buckled it. He left Ed staring blankly at this boots while Al made breakfast, then he dragged Ed over to the breakfast table and repeatedly shoved toast in his face until Ed’s FOOD!GIMME reflex kicked in and he began to eat."

lol. and yay!! new update for this one!!! your writing is so intriguing it just sucks me in and only spits me out when it sees fit lol. keep up the goodwork!!

that. was. amazing! i was so excited to see an update, and then it just totally blew my mind. ed and roy's emotions when they each thought they were going to die... i melted. this was so wonderful. and then...! roy has his eye back!! i have to know how (though i do suspect)! i look forward to the next chapter!

yay!!! update love XD

so glad they're still alive!! I was on pins and needles while they were down there fighting XD you must try to update faster!!

loved it, only a few typos and puncuation errors but love outweights it XD

kiki

Yikes! is that envy again! good chapter.

Ahh, an intense story. So full of detail and depth and at times I sit on the edge of my seat. I've spent the fast four days doing nothing but read this. Wow, when I finished watching FMA I was feeling some withdrawals but your set of stories were a perfect remedy. I will be waiting in anticipation to see if you continue!

If I was Ed I would totally do Ling.

I love this chapter! I laugh every time I ready it. I adored Al's instructions for Sophie. I loved the line "a row of puppies lined up for his puppy kicking pleasure". This chapter is just awesome.