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Lovely chapter. I think I already reviewed, but what the heck. You are a MEAN author to leave us with this cliff hanger for so long! Mean Mean Mean!

Yeah! SO glad you updated! I love the way you write Ed & Roy. I can HEAR them speaking as I read your story. I'm glad Roy shaved Ed's beard, lol.

I'm really glad you have Ed doing something. He's too smart and talented to not have any more adventures.

Oh my gosh, thank you so much!! I was really just about to die of starvation from lack of current chapters from this story (though it might have helped if I hadn't read the 1st story in a few days time and this one asap)! The wait was worth it though. I LOVED Ed trying to eat Roy's nose off! I was laughing out loud in the library and getting dirty looks, but I didn't care. Gluttony freaks me out, the characterization you've made I think is just perfect, crazy but scary sane too. R.D. is still the cutest thing ever. Al makes me squee with joy, I'm glad he finally got some! lol I can't believe you left it on such a cliff hanger! An incredibly awesome cliff hanger, but CLIFF HANGER nonetheless! Please update as soon as possible, I can't stand not knowing what happened to Roy! I worship you faithfully forever and ever, so update soon! =D

Yea! You updated! It's been so long, but it's been worth it. I check constantly, always hoping, and tonight was the lucky night! Please, please, please don't keep us hanging too long. This story is so wonderful, it leaves me breathless... I can't wait for the exciting rescue that must happen! Ed can't be left unhappily ever after, he just can't.

holy.... O_O damn the shit hit the fan...

better not keep us waiting too long after a chapter like that!!

kiki

omg, i knew that would happen. it was so totally awesome. i love this story and the way you tell it! i look forward to the next chapter!

It took me the better part of two weeks, but I made it through Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher and Better Living Through Alchemy (as well as a couple of your one-shots). The fangirl part of me is bouncing and squealing like a pocky-addled japanese schoolgirl about to meet her first tentacle monster, demanding you finish BLTA and gushing about how "kawaii" the stories are and "sugoi" that they are so long. And they were. Both of these stories were simply beyond amazing. They brought me to laughter, to tears, I've ground my teeth in frustration and ducked my head in embarassment. The entire emotional range and that was usually within the first few paragraphs per chapter.

The characterizations were some of the best I have ever seen. It blew me away how you managed to keep them in character, yet also let them grow and change. It got to the point I thought they were canon. Let me tell you, it's highly distrubing to be reading Roy Mustang or Better Living then start watching the anime and wonder "...why isn't Roy comforting Ed? He should be kissing him by now. And how come Al isn't being all puppy dog over Riza?" Yes, I did that a few times and I always had to reset my internal bearings to realize "Oh yeah, cuz this is the reality, the fanfic is the fantasy."

To offer some constructive criticism is a bit hard because this series is so good but there was one thing I kept noticing. One moment, a paragraph will be reading "He walked over and picked up a pen.." then mid-sentence will switch to "...and puts it in his mouth as he tries to think what to write." In both stories that happened fairly frequently and since it was just for a sentence or two it didn't really detract, but it was there enough to cause a bit of a stumbling block on the road to reading. There was a run-on sentence or two and a couple of typos, but nothing I could point out easily. I only noticed because I am a grammar and spelling nazi at times.

That was really all I can say in the manner of anything constructive. Now I'll stop my blathering, thank you for two wonderful stories and silently beg for you to continue with BLTA. I'm going to be needing a fix soon. ^_~

I love this fic. You right such HOT sex scenes. ANd ed is SO PERFECT. So fiesty and tough yet vulnerable.

I'd like to see him do something really alchemically brilliant though. and I want to see the chocolate sauce array in action!

You soo need to update! You know why? Because you AND this story rocks! So please update, okay?

I am LOVING this fic. I love the way you intertwine misery and joy and laughter and tears. I can just HEAR your characters speaking as I'm reading this fic. I love your Edward.