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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good grief...chapter 21 was a long time coming but holy cow...it was good!! I hope we don't have to wait as long for 22 O_O that'd be awful...
loved the Al/Riza bits XD
anyway hurry up and get the next installemt...the wait is killing me
kiki
loved the Al/Riza bits XD
anyway hurry up and get the next installemt...the wait is killing me
kiki
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you realize this, but most of this whole chapter is in italics, and I don't think it's supposed to be, sorry if it is though, it was just kind of confusing. And also, this is a tremendious sequal, the first story was excellent and this one is tremendous.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and by this chapter, I mean chapter 17. sorry
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please tell em that chapter 20 is not the last chapter, please please please. It is way too good of a stroy to end like that, I wann aknow what happens to them for the rest of their lives, or at elast for a few more years. *pleading looks* I am totally hooked to your work and I must say I am quite pleased there is a fan fiction author running around that has this much talent, ever thought of publishing? Because I'd liek to read some more of your stuff.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit.
do you know how amazing that was?
i laughed, i cried, my heart was broken, then fixed, then broken again, then some more laughter. that was FANTASTIC! From the very beginning to the start of the sequel to the end, I loved every minute of it. The best one I've ever read. holy cow.
you really, really, really, really, really, REALLY should continue this. and I mean really. ! PLEASE do.
wow.
FABULOUS!!
love much, pj
do you know how amazing that was?
i laughed, i cried, my heart was broken, then fixed, then broken again, then some more laughter. that was FANTASTIC! From the very beginning to the start of the sequel to the end, I loved every minute of it. The best one I've ever read. holy cow.
you really, really, really, really, really, REALLY should continue this. and I mean really. ! PLEASE do.
wow.
FABULOUS!!
love much, pj
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of the greatest FMA, RoyxEd, yaoi story's EVER! I have to admit that usually sequels don't fare as well as their originals, but this one is just as great I think! I really, really hope you update again soon! I will be looking forward to it!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST CONTINUE NOW PLZ PLZ OH GOD PLZ. IM DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I know that this isn't finished right? I mean, it's soooo good and I just, just, acck! There's going to be more, right? I mean, Al and Riza and Ed and the beard and well..it's not done. I swear, this is the single most incredible fanfiction I have ever read and if it's just left like this, I might actually die. Just stop living. Hehe, well maybe not DIE. But I will be incredibly disappointed. As I said, best fanfiction EVER. Please write more.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wait until Al (or someone who know Ed's dad) tell Ed that now he look like his father more than before. (Lettme see: long hair, ponytail, hmmm is he wore glasses? oh yeah and beard.)
A sure-fire way to get Ed shave. Heeheeheehehe
A sure-fire way to get Ed shave. Heeheeheehehe
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has to be the best FMA story I've ever read. I'm not kidding. I love this story sooo much! It makes me laugh, cry, and long for more! I can't wait until the next chapter! Keep up the amazing work!