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Holy crap yay!

I've been waiting for this fic to update in forever!!

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY WHAT A GRAND EVENING. AN UPDATE AND SUPERB AS ALWAYS. LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! IM SO GLAD AL AND HAWKEYE ARE GIVING IT A GO THEY ARE SO CUTE TOGETHER KEEPING ALL OF MY FINGERS CROSSED I ACTUALL LOVE THIS PAIRING BUT IT IS A VERY RARE ONE INDEED!!!!!!! AND THE OTHERS WERE AS CHARMING AS ALWAYS. ROY GOT HIS SPARK BACK LIFE IS GOOD IN ALCHEMY WORLD. HOWEVER PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO LET ED DO ANYTHING WITH LING. WHILE CHARACTER WISE I THINK YOU ARE DOING AN EXCELLENT JOB WITH A CHARACTER THAT MANY ARE NOT FAMILIAR WITH AND I DO FIND HIM ENDEARING HE IS A BASTARD FOR MESSING WITH ED. IT WOULD BE SO HORRIBLE, I MEAN JUST BECAUSE ED WAS LUCKY AND FOUND HIS TRUE LOVE OFF THE BAT WHY SHOULD THAT MATTER I KNOW SEVERAL COUPLES GOING ON 20+ YEARS OF MARRIAGE WITH THEIR FIRST LOVES, BUT I DIGRESS. BUT ROY COULD KICK HIS BUTT FOR TRYING THAT WOULD BE OKAY. ^_^ANYWAY I KNOW YOU PROBRABLY HAVE EVERYTHING WELL PLANNED OUT BUT HEY I CAN DREAM. ANYWAY MY REVIEWING MANIA IS OVER FOR TODAY. WONDERFUL AS ALWAYS. THE SMILEY BANDIT ^__^

Great chapter and if before i ended up reviewing you know you had 69 reviews!! BWA!HA!HA!HA!HA! Get it get it!! 69!!! OMG!! I was laughing and then reading the yumminess! XD Awesome chapter. Update soon ^^

wow, that was an awesome chapter.... so much happened!! lmao ed making al do alchemic baking.. that was too funny, and then when roy TASTED them.. and then BOUGHT the rest of them to save ed, and anyone that may have eaten them! lol

ed's students saving him and al from the pig was great, too! i was so happy ^__^ and then riza kissing al! sweet!! they are so cute together!!

the whole alchemic display was fucking awesome, and i loved ed getting so turned on by roy during that part.. that was HOT in more ways than one ^__~ i'm so happy roy did alchemy again! and the way you described it was really beautiful

aiyiyi though, besides all this, still fit some drama in... particularly the prince trying to stay away from al as promised, but also still making moves on ed.. damn, what's gonna happen? how far will things escalate before roy finds out?

oh well i can't WAIT for the next chapter! this story is so awesome, great work :D

~ lg

WOW! I loved this chapter. I can't wait for the next one! Things between Ling and Ed are making it interesting. Maybe Ed's afraid to lose Ling's friendship? And the fact that Ling appears to be a nice kisser. Roy's not gonna be happy at all when he finds out, though. Suge! I hope we'll see a new chapter soon ^_^

So good!!! You made up for the wait with a great chap, but please put a stop to Ling. I am greatly irritated with him, give him another guy, hey Cain's cute!!! Ok, I know that without an antagonist a story is dull, but please don't let him mess up Roy and Ed. Well, I read this slow to try to draw it out, it didn't work, it is just too good.

I waited so (im)patiently and checked frequently and finally was rewarded with another earthshaking and mind numbing chapter. And now I will wait with bated breath and on pins and needles to see what interesting and exciting events unfold in the next chapter. It is all so totally amazing, words just fail to do it justice in describing it\'s wonderfulness.

I just wanted to know whether you were planning on continuing this story.. I really hope you do! I think I can honestly say that this is the best Fullmetal Alchemist fic I've ever read here in Aff.net and also in ff.net.. You have a flair with words even I as a fellow writer can't hope to match! :) And I really like your take on the relationship of Roy and Ed.. It's your prerogative to decide whether to continue this story... but I really, really am hoping you will! Thanks and have a nice day!

I love your story, and i love how you portray ed and roy so well. i cant wait for the next update!

I know you're probably very busy with work and other things but please PLEASE continue with and finish this fic! This and "The Adventures . . ." are just so funny and sad and touching and beautiful (not to mention really hot) they make up for every FMA badfic I've read. I was glued to both fics, having to read them straight through, and I can't wait for more. The story is wonderfully written and crafted and it would be terrible if it were left unfinished, even though I know how hard it is to write when life gets in the way but PLEASE try and update soon! (Oh, and I'm really hoping Ed doesn't cheat on Roy with the prince.)