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As usual, superb chapter! Vegeta is so yummy in this fic! << you're seriously trying to get me to cheat on Piccolo, arent you =3 Cant wait for more, ESPECIALLY VEGETA GYRATING TO TECHNO XD

LATER. ROGUEFURY

Oh my God! I would have to say that you are my Hero, this is one of the best stories I'VE ever read. This is the type of relationship I long for. I cannot wait for the update! Yamucha deserves it, with that stupid bimbo, Bulma can OBVIOUSLY do so much better than him, just please don't change the way Vegeta is to her, it's way HOT!


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Your Biggest Fan

The very fact that you put "Onna" in the title... I will not be reading this.

Camaro

i love it!!!!!!!! it's perfect!!!!!!!!!!!
finally a story where vegeta is'nt all sappy
i mean i love fluff but to much spoils it update!!!!!!! email me when you do k thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^_^! I love it! you portray Vegeta and Bulma rather well. Keep the chapters comin' and i'll keep reading. <3

I love the story, however I have a question... In the third chapter, the line "boku wa dare?" I was wondering what you meant to say there. I've been studying Japanese for five years now, and "boku wa dare" would mean 'who am I?" the word Boku is the same as Watashi, only it is a bit more masculin... Not really something girls use very often, yet not unheard of. Where as Dare means who of course I'm sure you knew that... However, I was just wondering if perhaps you meant 'who is it?' or something along thoser lines. In which case you would use "Dare desu ka?" or "dare ka?" 'Ka' is simply a verbal question mark in the Japanese language. Sorry about the rant, and please continue the story... ^^

Wow, this was one of the awesomest Vegeta x Bulma fics I've read so far. You Portrayed Vegeta so coolly that it was easy for me to picture him saying and doing the things he did. Hope to see more from you.

LATER. ROGUEFURY

Great story, I really like, Please keep writing! I would love to see what happens next! Keep Writing!

Aaarrrrgggg! It just STOPS!!!!!! I can't believe you'd leave me hanging there--Update! Update! Please, oh please...

DameNight