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Well, I wasn't going to review because mine are truly horrid, but...here goes:

I sincerely think the ending of this chapter was my favorite part. Your characterization of Bulma was really good. She's always been one of my favorite characters! Next, Piccolo seemed a little...out of character for me. I don't quite know why. Maybe I just took his dialogue wrong. It wasn't a horrible character mash, only a slight change in his character at some of the things he said. Seemed a little goofy. Vegeta...I loved. There were a few points in which I thought his character might be a little out of his normal character but, in the end I ended up dismissing that thought altogether.

All in all, I really enjoyed this. I've bookmarked the page, and I do hope you decide to continue. It's a lovely storyline. I don't find too many stories here worth the words in review. But yours is definitely worth me having to wrack my brain for something intelligible to say. 8)

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Fantastic!!

I esp like the Piccolo bit, but then I have a soft spot for the greenman. I also appreciate the logic behind the title 'ruler of the world'. Well done.

Beyond that, I was smiling throughout the majority of the story. You really did well by this fic.

Kudos.

Loved it, especially the conversation between Vegeta and Piccolo. Such a fitting attitude for Vegeta to have... I smiled all the way through the second half of the story.

It reminded me of a favourite quote by the way: “To have the ability to do harm, but do it not.”