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OMG!! Poor Poor Trunks!!!! Thank god Goku's still kind. UPDATE SOON!!!

Really nice idea, I never thought of Boo in the future... It´s a real good way to start this story.

I wonder what will happen after Trunks finishes his tale. I can imagine a funny scene, though:

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*Trunks just finished and everything is quite*

Vegeta: *is pretty pissed & stands up* ... *chi radiates anger*

Trunks: *looks away thinking Vegeta is mad at him*

Goku: Vegeta? Were are you going?

Trunks: Huh? *looks up startled*

Vegeta: *while calmly marching to the door* Teaching myself a lesson or two.

*add great battle scene with many explosions and two pissed Vegetas here*

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And yes, I think our normal and 'good' (as good as he can get) Vegeta would win. Then they´d take Trunks with them and try to sort out his problems in a 'better environment'. ^^ I really hope he´s going to get better soon.

Oh, well, that explains it. Bulma should get over it non-the-less, why doesn't she adopt garndchildren? Wait, can male saiyans and half-saiyans have babies in this fic?

Yeah yeah yeah it's Mirai Trunks and Goku, Mirai Trunks and Goku, Mirai Trunks and Goku, oh yeah I love this pairing!!!

One thing I request, when you talk about Mirai Trunks in his own timeline, don't call him "Mirai", he's name is Trunks. It's one thing to read the name when he's in the past where there also is Chibi Trunks, but when you'r talking exclusively about the future timeline, it sounds weird to hear him being refered to as Mirai all the time.

It's "dilemma". No, really.

For anyone who reads the reviews frist I really liked the later chapters just because the first chapter was foreboding the rest of the story and you wonder why Trunks is like that. Okay I know I do not have eloquence when typing my comments but if you like writing this story I think you should just write it and say it is OOc so you won't get flamed like those other two reviewers. Looking forward to you next chapters if you are not so discouraged.

That was so awful, I wanna murder every single one of them... Chichi's just angry cause SHE was never able to get back at those who took everything from her: the androids; so now that the danger is over, she's letting out all the pent-up frustration on the next most suitable person, and Gohan surely feels he needs to impress his newly-recovered father (by the way, didn't they get to meet in Other World at all? Cause Gohan's attitude makes me think they didn't). Vegeta's just the arrogant stupid prick he was till the Cell saga, I wish the older Vegeta would teach him a very painful lesson. And don't get me started on Yamcha... *shoots him with so many ki-blasts all there is left afterwards is a smoking pile of ash*

The only one I can't understand really is Bulma... Does she feel guilty over Chichi's son dying to save hers or something? Cause that's the only thing that could ever explain it. However, I'm surprised Piccolo didn't see the need to step in.

Please update this story is really goood!!!!!!!!