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Wow, I only read this prologue and I'm already hooked! I'm assuming this person wants Duo's eyes... or the Gundam Pilots... I'm still trying to figure it out, lol. But anyway, awesome writing. Going to read the next chapter now ^.^

GAH! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!??!?! This is an AWESOME story! Your writing is amazing, and your idea is so well thought-out (from what I can tell so far). It's clear you've got a plan and a distinct direction for this fanfic, and I'm SO excited to find out what happens next! Awesome job! ^.^

will you please please please write some more! I adore mysteries and psychological thrillers! I think I'll go crazy if you don't finish this story!

Interesting cliff hanger. Do you suppose that Duo will tell anyone about the roses, pictures, and note. I can see him not saying anything, figuring not wanting anyone to worry and that he can take care of himself. However he is also smart enough to know that this is a bad idea. It also seems almost as though the person planed to get Heero out of the way. To have that old picture of Duo, most certainly means that whoever it is also grew up on the streets of L2 and could have paid an informer there to ask just for Heero.

This is just getting more and more intriguing! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what's going to happen. Good job!

Wow great chapter! So it sounds like the maniac hates Duo? At first, I thought he was obsessed with wanting Duo to belong to him. Very exciting!

That was really good :)
I can't wait to read more!!

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Jaina -

Good start! There were a few wrong word choices (like color for collar, where for were, or here for hear), but for the most part it sounds promising. I look forward to finding out who the maniac is and what kind of obsession he has for Duo.

EEEEEKKKKKKK!!!!!! That was good but why did you stop there?! I hate cliffhangers, that was a very bad place to stop, now your going to have me wondering what happens next.... Oh well, anywho I really liked it so update it soon^-^