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for Kitty In The Middle

by chinohana

person Virpi
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughing so hard so almost can't say anything* This is so good, I'm gonna die in here... *laughs some more* Okay... update soon please!
person cutenekojin
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just because of Rei I will post a review, no joke I would have posted anyways...I know that it was short but it was funny, lol really, seeing the reactions of the teens when they heard they could not fuck Rei and that if they did they would probably get their pride taken off xD Lol and that Tala didn't have much to offer, lol that made me laugh so hard. Oh and something funny too was that I can imagine Voltaire playing with a car toy lol, its just so helairous and stupid, lol XD Wirte more, and you really have to get Kai to fuck Rei senceless! xD
person j.s.
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kl chapter....its a very strange fic isnt it? oh well
update soon
person Virpi
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so much fun! xD *LMAO* Please update soon!

And hey, just for you to know, you put the Roman number wrong up there. You put IV as a 6, but in reality it means 4. 6 is VI. Was that any help? You put those I's on the right side of every number higher than 5, like 7 for example (VII).
person KamiaKotai
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! It is so adorable and the burn on Tala with the 'georgina' thing was priceless. I can't wait for your next update! Keep up the awesome work. Catcha' later.

-Kami
person lunartigergurl
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
y didn't u tell me about this????

now i can review YOUR story!
it was/is cute! u hav to update!!!! both ;)

missing your mails... T.T >sniffles a bit<

eh???
person cutenekojin
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol!! Hahaha, Drigger left because he was in heat, xD I wonder what will happen when Ray will be in heat, god this will be halarious! I hope that Kai and Ray get't together reawie, their like my fav. couple ever! Lol write more, I wanna read, this story is so funny and good! Great work!
person Virpi
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is SO good! Please update soon! xD
person cutenekojin
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really funny!! lol, Make them jump Ray!! lol no, make Kai jump Ray!! xD Lol, make him trick tala and brian to go somewhere else and then make Kai go with Ray alone at some place and...you know the rest!! xD lol, I also love the fact that you post often, really miii! write back, soon!! ^^ Arividelchi!!
person Virpi
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A correction to you: Tala's Japanese name is Yuri. It's spelled "yoorei". My friend told me that, and some one from her family speaks Russian. So duh, if you may correct that one.

But about the fic: I LOOOOOOOOVE it! Please update!

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