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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... that was really depressing, but so sickingly sweet and angsty at the same time. Just two things (I'm sorry for this, but it's just a peeve): there were two words you misspelled and they were beneath and retrieve. Again, wow.... I think it's more sad to me than sweet but still a good story.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so great, yet so sad. you truly are a good writer. I felt the pain, the want, the...everything. I look forward to reading more of your stories. good luck in the futer!