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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very cool, i like it! nice job, now update soon, kay? you should so an actual chapter, it would be awsome!
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"I'm not very good at English"
I don't beleive that for a second!
I liked that, each line had significance and meaning, often with these kind of poems you get throw-away for irrelavant lines but yours had none.
A clear message, beautifully and simply put.
Um.... I couldn't read the portugese one unfortunately lol!
I don't beleive that for a second!
I liked that, each line had significance and meaning, often with these kind of poems you get throw-away for irrelavant lines but yours had none.
A clear message, beautifully and simply put.
Um.... I couldn't read the portugese one unfortunately lol!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it
it's so ... dark and all that.
Make another chapter, please!!!
it's so ... dark and all that.
Make another chapter, please!!!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its good, i like it, however i do recommend making another chapter. cya soon
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I love him and the poem was good too^^
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all! No, I'd say very good! There were just a couple of understabable mistakes, that's it. Is there more of these? ^_^