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That was great. I love that way you write, you have amazing talent. I never would have guessed that Rei and Mystel would be that first to get it on. My fav part was when Mystel asked if they were gonna have sex and Rei said they were gonna make love. That was sooooo sweet. I must say I am looking forward to the Tala and Garland scene!!! Those too are a great couple. ; ) Anyway I look forward to the next chapter. Keep it up.
Peace Out
Winter-Rae

*drools* smut. Love it. So veryvery much. Love you so veryvery much. Thank you for teh brilliance of the ReiMystel

i don't have time to write

anyone willing to take over the story can if they want.


great chapter, update soon!!!!!


xxx

that isn't air thats not enough, wanr more, not a single chapter, ur makin my immagination run wild

Ooooo, now I really can't wait for the next chapter, I wanna see how Brooklyn reacts to hearing about BD! AND I wanna find out how it ends with Hitoshi--does he get paired up with someone else, or end up alone or what? MUST FIND OUT! RAWR!

i'm so glad someone decided to do another brooklynxkai fic!!!
it's sOoOOOooOOo good. much better than my attempt!!!

please update soon


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"I was swept into the dark heart of the wilderness..." Haru's line about getting lost in the woods for 3 days. Mystel written all over it. I never actually thought that he could just be LOST. Did he actually say he was on his way to Japan when he first met Rei? Maybe... *doesn't remember*

Filler chapter: still good. It wasn't boring, just not as... 'interesting' as chapter five. But I mean, what can you do to top that, right? XP. We need more Hitoshi anger. XD. *wants to see Hitoshi suffer* Bwahahaha, suffer. His suffering, suffer Takao's big brother, weep and shed tears for Kai is not yours, bwahaha! *O_O;; Underdog mp3 is playing now. scary.*

Chapter nine! Chapter nine! CHAPTER NINE!

~*KA*~

YAY GARLAND! *hugs Garland* Stand up for Brooklyn, yay! ^^ *cheers* But Rei, man... O O;;; *ears flatten and hides behind Garland* Mad Rei is SCARY!

~*KA*~

couldn't think of a decent response for chap. 4*

O[]O <-shocked face. Brooklyn was playing soltitaire, zomg! Poor Kai... he was scared shitless. *wants to hug Kai, give Brokklyn something to wash his hand with and find something sharp to stab Hitoshi with* Die, Hitoshi! *stab stab* Kai is Brooklyn's!

~*KA*~

Ah, the review cut off after the shocked face O[]O. wtf? anyway...

Brooklyn was playing solitaire! oO; In a room filled with other boys. Strange thought... having to play solitaire when there's boys almost EVERYWAY. *gets Brooklyn something to ah, clean his hand better than a handkerchief* Might wanna use some soap, buddy. ._.; And Kai's like "what the hell?! he fucking kissed me!" and *whoosh*, hauls ass. *wants to hug Kai* Oh, I have something for Hitoshi too *stabs him w/ something pointy repeatedly* Go away, Kai doesn't like you like that! DDDXXX!!! die die, go away. Xopying and paste 6 & 7 tomo. Make more chapters!

~*KA*~