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YAY!! you wrote more, goody goody gosh, can you write some more please and thankyou>>>>>had sugar>>>>>> its a really good story, i really enjoy reading it and your right there aren't enought brooklen kai stories out there, we definately need more of them

Another fantastic chappie! update soon yeah? this is getting good!

ooh
love da story
update soon
rei and mystel? nice one ;)

Woah this was a really good chapter! ^_^ I loved that when Tyson saved Kai from beybatteling Tala. Please update soon!

Oooooh. I think the devious Brooklyn is kinda sexy. He's so cool. Poor Kai. He has no idea what he's in for. And Tala. How does he get himself into these situations?

I found a picture of Garland on the web that shows his entire face and hair. It's small, but very clear. Maybe it will help you.

http://people.freenet.de/texania/Shinji-Tomodachi/Charas/Garland.PNG

Now I can't wait to see what happens. Rei's getting kind devious too. I wonder how he'll bag himself an Engyptian. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter. The sleepover is going to be hilarious. I'm twitching with anticipation. How is Kai going to react to Brooklyn being there after what happened in CH 1? And will anyone else find out about Kai's hands? Will they be able to be mended? Will he ever be able to blade properly again? Now I'm just making mysef want the next chapter even more!

Hey,

Another great chapter, Rei is so cute getting all obsessive over Mystel. You are right Brooklyn is cool, very cool infact. Dranzer died? I thought she ended up coming back in the end? Anyway I can't wait for your next chapter. Catcha' later.

-Kami

Hey great story. It's really detailed. Garland's hair is a greyish silver. He always has it up in a low ponytail as well. His eyes are a bluish silver colour. Quite lovely actually. Looking forward to reading more. Though I wish Tyson and Tala could get together. Love that pairing and haven't seen a full story with them in it. Do you think you could add them in your story? You'd be a real star if you could. Update soon.

I love your fic it's so good! Tala is so cute I absolutely adore him! Hey I was wondering, what is the name of Brooklyn's attack in the Italian version? Oh and you made a little mistake here....

He’d been sure about beating him, defeating him again, mortifying him and banishing him into the shadows… but as the match continued Brooklyn found himself more and more troubled by the way the crimson HAIRED teen’s reacted.

Did you mean Crimson Eyed? Anyway if not then sorry for bugging you! Oh and garlands hair is silver and I think his eyes are bluish-sliver but not sure on the eyes. Sorry. Anyway can't wait for your update. Catcha' later.

-Kami

Poor Kai. He just can't get a break, can he? Brooklyn is stalking him, his friends are crazy and now he has two of them living with him. Oh well, all the better. Garland has grey/blue hair and I think either grey eyes or golden eyes. I can't remember exactly its been so long. Oh, how will Brooklyn go about capturing the attention of our elusive Phoenix? We know neither will give in without a fight.

I think the Italian version is sexier, too. Kai as the King of Darkness? Oooh. *shivers* Love it! Will Brooklyn be able to tame him? I hope so! I also like the thought of ReiMystel. You could kinda see something going on there during the anime with those two. Which owuld explain why Rei is so afraid of Mariah's attention. I would love to see the normally serene Mystel jealous over someone else staking claim on Rei. It would be very cute. Now, I can't wait for the next chapter. You are a wonderful write and your works are just too great not to love. Not to mention the whole uke-Kai thing. (Long live UKE!Kai!!) ^_^

...pouty Tala? Fangirl Rei? confused Kai? Obessed Brooklyn? dude! You got this fic going down! Hurry up and finish, I wanna see how this ends!