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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I suppose it's good for a smutty story, but it's still kinda creepy. *yikes* The description was good though, and the characters were held up well through the story. Pan was a little cardboard though.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good update soon
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what should i say. it was insightive, and i would understand the situation. great fic. '
good luclk
may kami-sama be with you
good luclk
may kami-sama be with you
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There has to be a Gohan/Videl/Pan threesome in this story.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me likes. Pan is such a little hottie, youd better get another chapter out soon