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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*rubs hands together and cackles* ohohohoh! that was one hot lemon! certainly enough to get me going! those kinds with the ominous hint st the end are the best, and i love how you show the relationship between kai and tala, they're really funny!
keep it up!
keep it up!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue where Rei runs away and Kai and Tala get nervous because they are worried, and he gets kidnapped, and is happy about it, and when they find him, he doesn't want to go... something more, because it is so funny and good.
THANKS!!!
THANKS!!!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please write another one or chapter! Please! Its so good! Drugged Jelly! Thats gr8! i wanna c a Tala/Kai/Rei action! that would b brill!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH! words are cut! Fix it please!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! Totally awesome! Great oneshot!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bwahahahahaaaaa this is so funny! shame rei was humiliated that way... will there be an update or something? i would like to know the aftermaths of that event... *i'm such a pervert but who cares? XD*
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Start: O_O Couldn't stop, it was SOOOO good!!
End: CRUEL!!! You better make a sequel to this!! But that was mean from Kai and Tala! But please do that sequel! Bye!
End: CRUEL!!! You better make a sequel to this!! But that was mean from Kai and Tala! But please do that sequel! Bye!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really good! I'm not a jelly fan myself though. >.< But it was good all the same
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have got to write a follow up threesome story
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I also thought it was funny. :) At first I was also confused at what this 'jelly' was then I realized you were talking about jello cause I thought you were talking about jelly as in jam. I could literally hear the 'ding' go off in my head. The last letters on every line had been cut off but I was still able to read it find. it just looked weird is all. And you should change the rating to NC-17 since that lemon was definitely NC-17! Yummy though!