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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent read, keep up the good work with more chapters!
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!!!!! I LOVED IT VERY VERY VERY VERY MUCH!
BRAVO!
EMAIL ME WHEN U UPDATE!
~DogDemoness88
BRAVO!
EMAIL ME WHEN U UPDATE!
~DogDemoness88
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Girlfrog8966@wmconnect.com > my email sorry didnt put it other review!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! This is completely awesome! I can't believe you don't have a single review! Well, this story is going on my favorites because...well... I'm a BIG Son and family fan... Bardock is my favorite DBZ character...and I loved Radditz...no matter how evil he was!
I love this story because your OC is not Mary Suish, and she's real. I mean, she has a few Mary Suish qualities...but doesn't every girl in an anime? lol I love Radditz's innocent knowledge of his people and the way he interacts with everyone else.
It would be nice to see your OC interact more with her children because that would add depth to her personality as well give Radditz a look at what she would be like with their pups. Just a thought!
Great job!!
I love this story because your OC is not Mary Suish, and she's real. I mean, she has a few Mary Suish qualities...but doesn't every girl in an anime? lol I love Radditz's innocent knowledge of his people and the way he interacts with everyone else.
It would be nice to see your OC interact more with her children because that would add depth to her personality as well give Radditz a look at what she would be like with their pups. Just a thought!
Great job!!