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...only the true creative mind comes up with something like 4 large jugs of baby oil, bungee cords, and a carrot

o_O I envy thou, though I am somewhat frightened at the same time

awesome, bloody awesome. can't ait for the next chapter

Ah, the power of a pregnant woman! Nice job on this fic ^.^ I wonder what other perils Bulma will bestow on poor Vegeta!?! But, the thought of a baby oiled covered Goku...*swoon* LoL!

(rolls on floor laughing) oh man that was sooo funny. poor vegeta, keep it up i luv this

Hahhaa.. very cute chapter again. I never liked Goku much either until I began writing and dissecting his character. But yeah, very cute!

Camaro

I'm happy you updated :)

Aww man that's gotta hurts! I'm just glad I don't have to deal with getting kicked in the nuts! Great chapter and I'll be looking forward to reading more!

LOL. What's Bulma doing to herself, she's going to get ill.
I for one REALLY love this story, it's one of the best I have ever read
This story has a lot of potential, and could probably go on for MANY chapters without getting boring.

Awww.. haha, no offense taken. I'm just something of a sexist and I take every opportunity to give men shit. But no no, very cute chapter as well. I think it's a wonderful little read, the characters loveable and fun. I think I like Bulma better the way that you portray her! She's absolutely devious and I LOVE IT!

Vegeta is just as fun even when he isn't be a cold, heartless shit. His inward battle with himself is so cute and I must say, for it being such a quaint, simple little fic, you've definitely made him somewhat original compared to most people. He's not his hard ass, unlikeable self, but he's also not a whinny, undignified loser. He's just honest and adorable!

Very cute chapter, hope all is well!

Camaro

As soon as he put his testicles back together.. hahahah priceless! Very good chapter. I honestly adore the fact that I'm so sick I actually have time to READ stories. Crazy.

Camaro