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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not much on humorous stories, but this one actually made me crack a smile. The characters are much like they are in the child's 'version' of the anime, and I think it's very cute.
Great job on keeping the characters fun and playful. Kudoes!
Great job on keeping the characters fun and playful. Kudoes!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww how sweet! Bulma's having a baby! And she's fisty. Never mess with a pregnant woman...And now for chapter 2!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and update soon!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::looks at you::
While I don't exactly know how I feel about you referring to Bulma as a tramp, I'll forgive you because you're a man and I ought not to expect much more.
Other than that, this is ADORABLE! I really can't give you any criticism because it's just a lighthearted, fun little read. I really enjoy it. It's simple and it's very entertaining... and it's written well.
Very nice, hope to see another chapter soon.
Camaro
While I don't exactly know how I feel about you referring to Bulma as a tramp, I'll forgive you because you're a man and I ought not to expect much more.
Other than that, this is ADORABLE! I really can't give you any criticism because it's just a lighthearted, fun little read. I really enjoy it. It's simple and it's very entertaining... and it's written well.
Very nice, hope to see another chapter soon.
Camaro