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for Coup D'etat of Adolescence

by Skydark1

person lo
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet, it made me grin.
person luckyducky7too
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Always like Al to think about it logically. I laughed when Ed attempted diving. It just seemed so like him to do something that stupid without really thinking first.
person Miyuki
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i was just wonderi g i loved both your stories about roy and ed, this one and sex ed with roy, please please write another story for me? i love the way you wirte about them and i'd love it if you wrote one more!! thank you, if you can or cant please e-mail me about it.
person V
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, although the dialogue got a little stilted sometimes. And the omake... perfect.
person ladygizarme
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heehee, that was a nice lil slice of 'lost chapter', entertaining, sweet, and the end with al was tooooo great lol
person Lolichan
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely beautiful. ^////^
person Ri
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! i love your work! you write so cool!! loved it great job ^______^
person Arra
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. I love you.

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