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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg I loved that soooo much!
It wasn't just sex like some other stories, there was actually a plot and thought behind it. It was incredible, keep up the awesome work!!
It wasn't just sex like some other stories, there was actually a plot and thought behind it. It was incredible, keep up the awesome work!!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sky, you know I adore this fic <3 Though I must emo over the loss of the line "That was a very...singular experience." That was my favorite part of the original, because poor Ed was such a dork he was stilll speaking in stiff scientific terms :) It makes Alfons' line after that make a bit more sense, if he's being all scientific?
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was gorgeous - just beautiful.
Once again you show us, in sublime prose, what it means to love Edward Elric. You bring such flesh (sorry, no better word) to the simple canon frame of his (and other), character, that he becomes a real, whole person with pain and joy and need.
Again, I am wishing that *you* were writing the actual series. That you could write the next movie. Not just for how you depict these complicated, intimate encounters, but in the way you deal with the whole Hagaren world, the people in it.
I used to think I wrote fan fic. Now I know I'm just playing at it. *You* are what I want to be when I grow up...
Once again you show us, in sublime prose, what it means to love Edward Elric. You bring such flesh (sorry, no better word) to the simple canon frame of his (and other), character, that he becomes a real, whole person with pain and joy and need.
Again, I am wishing that *you* were writing the actual series. That you could write the next movie. Not just for how you depict these complicated, intimate encounters, but in the way you deal with the whole Hagaren world, the people in it.
I used to think I wrote fan fic. Now I know I'm just playing at it. *You* are what I want to be when I grow up...
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
weeee very well written ^.^ i ummm really enjoyed this lil jem, lol i look forward to more from you!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So sweet.
I love the way Alfons tries to comfort Ed, and how he seeks to make him feel good.
Very nice , I hope to read more of your work soon enough ^_^
I love the way Alfons tries to comfort Ed, and how he seeks to make him feel good.
Very nice , I hope to read more of your work soon enough ^_^
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding, as always... I am in awe of your talent. *grin* And your stamina. Damn! I wish I could still write fifty gazillion pages of fanfic a day and have it be that good. I love your Roy/Ed, adore your Ed/Roy, but you made this pairing very endearing. I love the allusions to rocket science. To the moon, Alice, indeed! *lol* I also like how realistic you make Ed's first time, with all its fumbling and awkwardness. Also, being an historian by profession myself, I quite appreciated the historic touches: the lard block, the icebox, etc. Again, simply awesome.
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The offical movie spelling of the Alter Universe Alphonse is Alfons.
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work! but it's "Alphose"!!!