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wow....just, wow. That last chapter is the perfect balance of hot guy-on-guy action and such deep heart-breaking love. The silence was perfect. I can just picture, the room filled with just moans. -shivers- Oh don't you love having a great imagination -grins- I can't wait for more.

please PLEASE continue this story it's WONDERFUL!!! if Affie and i do half as well as you with our story (still in the planning stages) we'll consider ourselves luckey

Rysha and Affie

*_* I love how you write them, so very much. Ed is so sweet and Roy is just starting to realize how much he needs him, and it is beautiful.

Oh.My.God. This is simply amazing. You have to update as soon as possible! Theirs is such a beautifully tragic love! How Roy knows that "the end" is near, that circumstances beyond their control would ultimately, finally, and irrevocably draw Edward away from him, I have no idea. such bittersweet drama! You're breaking my heart! And, Oh Lord!, I just know I'll cry a river when the end does come! I don't know how closely you are sticking to the canon, but if you are staying really close to it then I know I'm done for! :) Are you going to include the movie canon in this too? I should just go now and get a big box of tissues and be done with it! :) You have written such intense passion into every moment that Roy and Ed have had together! (Not to mention the totally hot smex! w00t!) The whole rest of the world just seems to disappear in the face of their need to have one another. Even their first wild encounter in the office had such a desperate intensity of desire to it. It's like every moment they have together will be their last and they are trying to draw anything and everything they can out of it. They need each other like they need to breathe. I totally love this!!
Please update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Wow! *brain shutting down* that was so Hot! and sad and so...*can't think of words* I hope you post more this is so enjoyable to read. *wonders off in search of cold shower*

Whoo, that was very nice...lol. I'm commenting on both chapters, and it's very... well... hot, I suppose is the right way to say it. :) (:

I like the preview as well! :D

Oh wow, that was very well done. I really enjoyed the first chapter, and I hope the rest of the story is just as wonderful. :) (:

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*lunges at you and strangles*

FINISH IT!!!!! FINISH THE PORN!! THE INTROSPECT!!! THE PORN!!! AHHHHHHH!!! DARN YOU IRENE!!

XD

FINISH THIS FIC, WOMAN!! Sorry I haven't finished reading Branded yet. Gah...sooo busy.... Your previews made me all drooly though. ^_^