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Oh My God. You have gooooot to write more to this. That preview made me almost need to take an ice cold shower.
this is great. Add more like...yesterday.

I have to say that I am struck by few stories I read here as heavily as I have been struck by this one. I am in awe of the grace you bestowed on such a simple, seemingly innocuous, story. The first chapter spoke well for itself, and I was incredibly pleased to see that there was more... but not before I reread the first chapter twice! This is amazing, and I can't wait to see more. I'll be watching!

O_O you pimped out my story. That's like... the ultimate compliment to me. Thanks deary. *huggles*

Beautiful as always. I impatiently await the rest of the chapter and the chapter 2 rewrite.

*sees update* HURRAY!


*sees its only a preview* Darn! *gets bubbly* But its /still/ an update!

*Reads preview*

*squeals*

Oh I can't wait to read the full update!

Fuck 'em Roy! Woo hoo! ^^

I love it! And I can't wait to read those other chapters, and the revised chapter as well! *drools*

Oh, this chap is gonna be hot, isn't it? *giggles*

Its gonna be fuunnnnnnnnnn!


Roy wants to kkkkkkkkkisiiiiiissssss himmmmm......
He wants to hhhhhhhhhhuuuuuuggggggg hhhhhimmmmmm.
He wants to fffffffuuuuucccccckkkkk hhhhhhhhhimmmmmmm!

OOOOOOhhh I can't wait! I'm gonna be here till the end, don't you worry! Ya got me hooked! ^^ Ya lost me with the 'splaining, but I understand your re-writing that chapter.. 'S all I care about... That and the other chapters! ^^lol I'm hopeless, sorry, but at least I understand what I do! ^^lol

[To your response]



^^ Hey my fav author! I'm fine, though that drooling problem hasn't left yet... I talked ta my doctor, and he suggested less roy/ed stories. but I couldn't do that! I refused to listen to his advice (sighes) I guess I'll just have ta drink plenty of water, ne? ^^ I'm getting more sleep (sadly)... I screwed up my sleeping clock sooo bad I go to sleep at nine now! *cries* its horrible waking at 5 in the morning because my body refuses to sleep too long! I can't wait to read your ending of Undiscovered! ^^Oooo I gotta read that! If it does as you say... *giggles* I'll have to check it out... Make sure its safe for you to read! Don't want your brain going caput after reading it! ^^ I'll follow your advice, as you haven't steered me wrong yet! ^^lol I'm sure it'll be just as great as you say!

By the way! I've gone to another site recently: You Tube... Its like a site for music videos (and episodes of some shows) made by people around the world.... You can find TONS of anime videos with music from like Linkin Park and others... You should look up ~'Brothers'~ and listen to it... Make sure to add ~Full Metal Alchemist~ with it... Its a song sung by Edward Elric's voice actor! And it is sooo BEAUTIFUL! Its sad too, but its great, I think.... You might like it!

I wanted to review this last night (more like this morning :P), but I couldn't connect with the database or something along those lines. I know that I had to come back and review this, you deserve it, this rocks. Anyway I love Roy/Ed. They are so, so very hot togehter! I also have to say that this is one of those fics I can say that I enjoy not only for the yaoi aspect, but for the writing style as well.^^ Another thing I like about this fic, is how you make it seem like it could have actually happened, the way you work in the actual storyline. If only us yaoi fans could get a hold of the rights to FMA! *snif*Please do keep it, I am LOVING this! =)

oh yeah! Roy and Ed make so fine pair! They just match :D And dominance is always good, well, Roy was trying to take the dominance, but we don't care :D Ed is so strong person, that owning him would be really diffigult.

milky: mutual hero worship. Cool... I truly love your writing style and wish I could create the kind of images you do... Along with Operant Conditioning and Hold the Cherry, I've just read and been wowed by Unexpected. So wonderful. You also are my hero for leading me, through your recommendations list, to the most incredible (and inadequately named) piece of fan fiction I have ever read - the sweet, funny, romantic, exciting, hot, hot, HOT Adventures of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher... Skydark is brilliant. I've already left her copious starstruck feedback, so I won't burble on here further except to send a "thanks!" to you for pointing me in her direction. As for LJ, I *am* a member, but was just banned from the FMA yaoi for having the audacity to ask a question... (Any "non-content" posting is, apparantly, considered spam... Great! I'm now lumped in the same category as the folks trying to sell Viagra over the internet and those people from Nigeria hoping to get someone to help them with their money problems...) While I was embarrassed and confessed my idiocy (and most people were very helpful and nice), I didn't immediately beg forgiveness for my indiscretion, so one of the mods offed me... Which is sad because I really wanted to spend a lot of time there. I do have an account, though, but am a little rusty on LJ. Be nice to hook-up with you, and some of the other smart, talented FMA people on LJ...

Pickles: Can't remember if I answered this already, but I've found a ton (92, actually) of doujinshi at RizaHawkeye.com. They down-load page-by-page and many are translated into English. Some very wonderful stuff there, whatever your 'ship interests... I think all of them are pretty much NC-17, just so's you know.

pepp: Hey, honey! How you doing? Getting sleep, eating good, got that drooling problem under control? :D I'm working on the ending for Undiscovered, but have momentarily handed over control of my brain functions to a little, epic fic called The Adventures of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher, written by Skydark. Hard to think about writing more myself when there is such perfect perfection out there... You should check it out if you haven't already. And the sequel, Better Living Through Alchemy is already up to 16 chapters. Check her out, girl! You'll be glad you did...

OnyxLight: Thanks! So! Much! Every fic I read, I learn a little more... Which is not to say [cough, cough] that I plagiarize, mind you, (NO WAY!!) but that seeing how other people handle it, inspires me to add more detail and more...heat.

Sasu: I like the Roy dominance thing, but I think I like unexpected dominance even more. And an Ed that knows what he wants and goes after it, is a mighty fine thing indeed. Expect Fullmetal to take some control of the situation in the next chapter. BTW, I agree with you - how does one "own" Ed?

That was one of the hotest scenes I have read in a long long time...Well done!

*cracks, laughing her butt off*

^^lol Yes, I suppose a trip to staples is something on my to-do list! ^^ And I can see where the not getting the 'me-time' would bother new mothers... ^^ My ma was really crazy after my baby sis was born... I was stuck baby-sittong while she and my step-dad would go out, so I didn't get much free time when she started going out again...

Taking your time with the next chapter is a-ok with me! It just makes it all the better!! lol And i can understand that you would need to 'scope out the competition', so to speak, by looking at other stories... *winks*

I can wait for the next chapter! Or I shall try to at least... And i took your advice in trying to keep hydrated! lol^^