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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*drools*
*whistles loudly* Woohoo!! Rock on! I loved it! I cant wait till the next chapter! Very in-depth, I think!
~For years now, he’d been studiously avoiding, both in internal conversations (yes, he talked to himself!)~
That part was my favorite! ANd when you talked about the mother with tots and some of the men, even Havoc... ^^ The mom-parts were kinda creepy, but I guess I could understand, though I wouldn't have any tots holding /me/ back... ^^lol
A superb job, I must say! ANd it was a lot better than the partial, I think!
*whistles loudly* Woohoo!! Rock on! I loved it! I cant wait till the next chapter! Very in-depth, I think!
~For years now, he’d been studiously avoiding, both in internal conversations (yes, he talked to himself!)~
That part was my favorite! ANd when you talked about the mother with tots and some of the men, even Havoc... ^^ The mom-parts were kinda creepy, but I guess I could understand, though I wouldn't have any tots holding /me/ back... ^^lol
A superb job, I must say! ANd it was a lot better than the partial, I think!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, never fear,your story is never going to get more than me drooling over my keyboard! I think that my comp really hates you right now for it! ^^lol
I fear that I may never be normal again while reviewing! *cries* Oh normalcy, I never knew ye... ^^
lol
Sadly, what I just sad was true!! I have never been normal *sniffles* BUt, as they say, you can't really miss what you never had, ne? ANd I have a much better time being my weird self!! ^^
So, rock on!
I fear that I may never be normal again while reviewing! *cries* Oh normalcy, I never knew ye... ^^
lol
Sadly, what I just sad was true!! I have never been normal *sniffles* BUt, as they say, you can't really miss what you never had, ne? ANd I have a much better time being my weird self!! ^^
So, rock on!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD Hey, smut is smut - so far, you're MY hero for doing something different. I can't count the number of times there's been RoyEd office sex, where Ed is just Randomly Pissy - instead, you used a part of the series where *gasp* emotions were running high for a REAL reason. Bravo. Still desperate for more of this, though - you left us (and Ed) hanging! Evil! :D Do you have a livejournal or something like that where you update? I don't check AFFN very often, but LJ I am addicted to f^^;
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You say this was inspired by a doujinshi? Did you buy it for yourself or did you download it somewhere? If you downloaded it, would you mine telling me where I could get it? There's nothing better than a good Roy/Ed doujinshi...
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD YOU"RE EVIL! Seriously.... but I still love ya! Good work. Keep it up. I like the more introspective version of the chappie.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, dearie! I like the introspection, too!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
evil, evil EVIL stopping point... and it seems like there are an awful lot of horny gay men in central...
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:O You evil, evil temptress! What do you mean, there isn't any more!? It's so brilliant...
*clings*
*clings*
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm mmm good! The first chapter didn't really catch my attention...BUT OMG THIS SECOND PART HAS! It's got a nice blend of humor and smut and it's absolutely adorable :) I do hope you're going to continue this, it's so cute. And the urgency is really, really sexy <3
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Very nice. I want another encounter with Roy and Ed. The first you wrote was so damn hot. ^_^