rate_review Reviews

*drool* sweetie... you never cease to amaze me

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*coughs* uh wha-huh? Oh! ^^ *glomps*

(ten minutes later, lets go)

Ah, what the hell!

*hugs close to death*

Hurray! Oh! I loved this story!

And i can't wait to see what your ah cookin! ^^ lol

I swear! If a person can shut off a readers brain, it /has/ to tell you that your doin' well! ^^lol But I /am/ an easily distracted, and easily won over! Just get Roy and Ed in a room together and I am there like white on rice! ^^lol

I saw up to I think episode 40, tho I don't pay attention to the no.s, just the action... butthe episode is when Ed meets Rose again (she's like mute) and then your about to learn more about what has happened after he had left and the military tried to gain control (Scar's in it as well as GLuttony and Lust), then the episode ends! *cries*



But this is just the story to fill the gap!! ^^

Hurray! Hooha! *glomps again* Oh! I can't wait! *jumps up and down excitedly*

It feels just like Christmas again!

(brain thinks about what could be and then moves toward last chapter and... shuts off... again)




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*In seeing the update, her brain has shut on, if only partially* ^^lol I loved it! *squeals* Oh! I loved

"Damn-Oh-DAMN-That-Was-Gooood Fullmetal…"

the best! ^^ It was hilarious! And being inside Ed's mind thinking all those things was sooo funny! ^^ And drool-worthy again, of course! Your depictions of the characters are great! I loved it! I just can';t seem to be able to say that enough! ^^lol

And the replay of what Roy was doing? *drools*

(with great difficulty, she pulls herself away from a lovely dream to complete the review)


*clears throat* uh, *grabs mop and hurriedly cleans up drool* (mop disappears)


I can't wait to read the full thing! And how Falman didn't have a CLUE what was going on? He /does/ seem the kind of person how is too busy learning latin terms for things to realize whats going on around him! ^^lol

I liked how Ed climbed into the backseat to FINISH what he was doing! ^^lol

And you are right!! I SHOULD watch some Toons soon! ^^lol Bless your heart! You know my weaknesses! ^^lol

*glomps* (in a babying voice) The bestest awrtur es sooo suweet tinking of tee reviewers! Awww!!! ^^lol

Oh my gods! I haven'rt gone goo goo eyes to any Ed'n'Roy goodness yet... (ideas start popping up in her head) uh oh... *giggles* (makes goo goo eyes, drool escaping)

*has enough will power to say:" too late...


*drools*

*is dead to the world*

pepp - you are one very, very silly person. So glad to hear you're liking what I'm doing. I want you to know that keeping you acting silly is one of my reasons for writing more. How long can the writer keep the reader talking nutsy and drooling? How long can she keep putting these two beautiful men into more and more lemony situations and still have normal conversations with her 95 year old aunt and people she meets in the supermarket? I'm being corrupted, folks, and I'm takin' y'all with me! Two words: Gaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!! and Mmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnn... (Personally, I'm likin' the second one more.

Off to let Edward...finish. [devilish grin]

Irene

FYI: If you're trying to stay cannon Ed and Roy meet up twice after the Lior incident. If you want info, I can fill you in ( I watched a couple of those episodes a ton while working on a one shot based on the first time they see eachother after Lior) or you can wait til your FMA gets to ya. ^_^ I had to come read this again, I loves it.

Amazing O_O This fanfic is so hot! One of the best RoyEd lemon fanfics I've ever read. I just hope you keep writting!

i absolutely love part two, especially the list of parts ed plays, it's funny-cute. ^^ and "I thought i heard you moan in pain" XD

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I loved it! ^^ it was great! ANd I just love how you portrayed the characters! And I really loved Roy's possessiveness in there! Is there any chance there could be more? Cause /damn/ this was gooood! ^^

this is a really good fic. but i dont get the pairing. all my friends think that roy and hughs should be fucking, even though hughs i married. but i like your fic i was really hot.

Bullying_Hommunculus - No specific doujinshi; just noticed that most of them put Roy in that roll' very dominant to Ed's unwilling submissive, a roll I chose not to have him play. Thanks for the review. BTW, if you go to RizaHawkeye.com, you can find many, many great doujinshi, yaoi and het. Some great stuff...